All Comments on 'Mixed Drinks, Bahama Sunset'

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Fantastic story! Loved the story as well as hearing about some characters from previous stories. Five big stars. Thanks for sharing your work with us.

WTF! Bro the sudden twist of Kelli's death takes place in the story you shocked me you should not do that. But your story is amazing I LOVED IT you are a good story weaver.

So over the top! Great fun.

You have too have twenty million index cards to keep up with all your lovable, crazy characters!

Another great view into JB44s world. Loved it Five Stars worth.

A deeply affecting story. I wonder if anyone outside of the peripheral characters was worthy of redemption. I do feel sympathy for Bonnie - her upbringing wrought with repeated rejections - but it’s the sympathy I’d feel for any other sociopaths who make a life out of eating up and spitting out the people with whom they interact. What a cut-throat and cruel world in which Bonnie thrives. God help the poor flies who wander into her web.

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Not a feel good story, to be sure, but a story of profound impact. Bonnie is protagonist/antagonist I won’t soon forget. A fine piece of storytelling, or should I say web weaving? Thanks once again for another glimpse into your literary world.

Wow so many characters pulled from so many stories! Incredible the way they are created and weaves into other stories. Sometimes I remember a few but this story really had a lot in it.

Thank you for sharing please keep doing your pleasure and I will keep being entertained by your stories.