All Comments on 'Mirror Image'

beautiful.

i always check the new story listing just in case there is a story by you posted. i have loved each one, and so eagerly await the next thanks.

that was beautiful and i hope maybe in the future that you will write leon's half of the story.

when is Leon's story out? i hope is it is soon.

Love your stories Pelaam! In fact I didn't start reading Gay Male stories until I read one of yours and now I'm hooked! :) Can't wait for Leon and Paytah! Hint hint...lol.

Loved the story. The only problem I had was that I didn't feel the build up for Noel's masturbation scene. To me it felt like oh well i'm home from work, it must be time to jack off. I would have liked more sexual tension built up and then have Noel unable to put off his release any longer.

I hope you find my comment constructive. I am not bagging you. I thought it was a wonderful story all in all.

Although Vampires and Lovers is still my all time fav of yours I loved this story. I was so stressed for Noel being found out and losing his love thank goodness for Paytah figuring it all out! Phew! I really enjoyed the confusion in the office when Leon owning up to sleeping with the bitch and Celestin not seeming to care. LOL

Please please please would you write Paytah's and Leon's story? And if you manage to finish that, would you write Chris the lion story?? Love reading your work. It's a really good day when there is a new post from you!!

Please do a story on Leon and Paytah, pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!! You are such a wonderful writer!! I love all of your stories!! Thank you!

I agree with Alexandra36 can you please please pretty please do a story about Paytah and Leon, and i love every single one of your stories you a such a talented writer. :)

I loved it - well written, and as enjoyable as all your works. I loved the twin theme, only one thing is missing - can you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a follow-up for Paytah and Leon? Even if it's just fluff, I want to hear more about them!

That was purly novel quality! I loved that, twas a sweet story. :). Think i shall be reading more of your stuff.

I have to say I just melted with this heart warming tale. Truly makes you believe in lifelong soul mates. I have to tell you that your talented use of verbal imagery works passion within when reading this story. I'm sated and exhausted with pure bliss as I was transported into their joys and sexual releases. Please keep up with your beautiful writing! And yes paytah and Leon would be a great follow up as Celestin and Noel travel on their honeymoon (which of course would follow a grand fashionable wedding! ;)

So hot. And omg that was like wow. There should be one with Leon and Paytahs love. That be so cute. Xd.

great hot story!!!!

and yes love to hear Paytah and Leon's story..

keep up your fantastic writing~!

As always you're a awesome writer!

Please keep this fantastic work up and i can't wait to read more stories from you!

I have to agree your writing is awesome I hope there is more to this story but well written

I think my brain took a holiday because I never noticed the first time I read this that Noel is Leon spelt backwards. LOL

So sweet, heartfelt and romantic.

You should definitely write a story about Leon and Paytah

lost intrest in this.? dont know why it started so well ......you cant please every one all the time.? soz x x x x x x

dinkyboots, shut up. where are your other two profiles that you pretend follow you and talk to you.

Very sweet - liked all the main characters, liked that the Good Guys won :-)

coming back to this story. It's perfect. Thank you!

Next is the Wedding then the Working Honeymoon. Then Leon's and Payta's Wedding and Honeymoon. Throw in some angst about meeting each other's In-Laws. And you've got the makings of a Series. Yeeeeah!!!!!

I need Leon's story! Is he the top or is Paytah, or do they switch hit? Dying to know!

I read this again and I really want more. I need Paytah and Leon's story! They need to have an office romance while Noel and Celestin are honeymooning.

Though I''d love a goose into Leon and Paytah's relationship

So, that's one sides of the story, but what about his brother? I am sure his story will be just as interesting. Thanks