All Comments on 'Mira Ch. 12'

Poor Aris! You have left me wondering what has happened to her. Poor Mira! Her heart is breaking; I can almost feel it. Poor Rillan! He is so tormented by the beast and the love he has for Mira. And how will he deal with the "army" coming to destroy him and the Circle? I do not know how you will pull it together and give them their happy ending. Maybe they will not have a happy ending, what to do with the beast? But I will be waiting for the next chapter. Please continue; your writing is inspirational.

for Aris. I understand that's she's afraid but reacting that strongly isn't going to encourage him to be gentle with her. She was so hysterical, talking just wouldn't have worked. Didn't Mira realize that Rillan was so nice because he cared for her? Anyway, really looking forward to the next chapter. And thrilled about the upcoming return of Leader of the Pack. Thanks for writing.

plz write mo

Not much sympathy for Aris. This story just keeps getting better and better and I'll be sad when it ends. <br> If/when you bring it out in print, drop me a line? I would definitely be interested.

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Forget the other sacrafice!

I want my vamp boy and my girlie together! And i'm sure both of them want the same thing. PLEASE make them together. I can't stand the sight or thought of my girlie with that 'Liam' character. He seems like a pu$$y of a man anyways. :) hahaha

LOVE the chapter though and I do love all of your work so I'll be buying both of your stories when they come onto print. Especially since i'm your favorite Muse! :) hahaha

Oh yea, i hired myself as your muse. I bug you about every chapter that you have posted from both stories lol. You should be used to it by now. :)

-Bella

almost done yes but your drawing it out soo sloooooooooooowwwly.. oh but I love mira so much I just want to see her happy with her love please please please post the rest sooon.. PLEASE.. i love your stories and this one is just one more to love...obviously hoping for more soon.. thank you for writing them all...

longing for more, hope you dont keep me hanging long

Your story reminded me of Twilight by Stephenie Meyer, or at least, the recent chapters. Vampire leaves human because vampire thinks it's for the best; but you're story was much better and not stupid at all. But, you're characters have depth where Stephenie Meyer's characters did not have any at all. Also, you're story is also interesting with events going on.<br/>

I'm looking forward to the next chapters.<br/><br/>

P.S. I'm sorry for comparing you to Stephenie Meyer. That was harsh, even on my scale.

To describe how wonderful I think this story is. I thought nothing could top leader of the Pack. But this is giving it a run for it's money.

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

And you're characters are so very good. I liked Stephenie Meyers series but I still, after having read them twice, cannot wrap my head around her main character. I had to read her 12 chapter draft on her website of Midnight Sun to actually understand her. I have to agree with tnme3, her characters have no depth. Mira and Rillan are wonderful.

Keep up the great work.

I love this story and I hope mira and rollen end up together I will keep reading Love it

Cullen & Aislin came to the rescue?

They were so close to being reuinited!!

You made me cry with the ending!

And when she woke up? Oh my god!! My heart broke.