All Comments on 'Master of the House Again'

This is my favorite of your series of stories.

Great story. However, you briefly had Miranda wearing pantyhose, “I rubbed my hands over Miranda's pantyhose-covered ass. Her pantyhose was the softest I'd ever felt. I could have done this forever and been content, but I finally stripped her pantyhose off,”. Minor faux pas, but very noticeable by this nylon admirer

Now THIS is an illustrated story. Not just 2 pictures off some sailboat. Well done, SSL!! 5 stars, of course.

Dr beulahthemick; Another, hot pussy soaking story, complete with wonderful pictures, five naturally.

Sorry, but I can’t get past these 1980’s looking computer graphics. I’d rather have the story without them.

I always picked Miranda to be a raven haired beauty with long hair and a tan. Still good, even with the pictures.

I really enjoyed the first instalment. This one left me dripping wet and gagging for some cock. As I'm home alone, and not due to see my lover until tomorrow, my rabbit had to satisfy me. A superb incest story, Jasmine. I can't wait for the next chapter. 5 stars.

He should make his mom his slut to save her from Ellie.

well, what's going to happen to Dad?

I usually love your stories and this is no exception, but part way through Miranda was wearing pantyhose that Curtis took off of her. Before that she was wearing thigh highs with no panties, and the illustrations always showed her with the thigh highs. I still enjoyed the story a lot though.

I don’t know what program you are using for your pictures but they look incredible. There is so much texture in the pictures. Love the look of their skin. Oh and the story was hot too. Pleasantly surprised that Curtis stayed awkward and didn't instantly become a dominant super stud. Interested to see where you take this story. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Excellent!

Would love to join their fun!

This was so hot! Amy x

Leave the 3D art out. It looks awful.

Really waiting on the conclusion of Becoming a Lesbian Slave chapter 6

What happened? This is shown as part two of a series with Man of the House (a she-male story), but it is instead a sequel to What Mom Doesn't Know Will Fuck Her. Did Literotica mix this up or did you? I haven't read this story yet since I wanted to read the first part, only to find it was the wrong story. Anyway, both stories were good so I'll go ahead and try this one.

"This is a sequel to the story What Mom Doesn't Know Will Fuck Her."

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This is a good example of problems with the site's new format for the writer's story list. Before it was a nice, tightly spaced list of all of the stories. Yes,. being able to sort by date or alphabetically is good but there's also a lot of wasted empty space. More importantly, for a story title that begins at the end of the alphabet for a writer who's posted a lot of stories, it requires changing from the default date and expanding the list over and over and over. It's a rather poor design.

Great story and HOT but at one point you have Mom tell Curtis to take off Miranda's pantyhose but before that Curtis found out Miranda was wearing thigh highs and not pantyhose. BTW Thigh highs are MUCH better that pantyhose.

Another five star winner. Will be happy to see the next istallment.

So this is just the "what mom knows" series with a new name and pictures??

Don't get me wrong, though loved the story the first time around. I got all excited when I saw a new story.

I'm confused, the story above reads as it 2 of what mom knows but when I go back to the 1st part man of the house it's about other people n a completely different story?? Am I missing something?

Hi

Please note that the first part is called Master of the House. I screwed up and titled it wrong. I will be sending in a new draft as soon as I get home, I’ll also fix the continuity errrors.

Thanks

Definitely look forward to reading him taking her juicy ass

Liked the 3D art. 5 stars solid cum story. Delicious!

Cartoonish pictures and same-old same-old writing...three stars.

Really like your story.

One issue though, when Curtis first meets Miranda she has thigh- highs on and mo panties and then as action starts she has panty hose on.

Loved this story but there should have been more mother and son sex gave it a 5 and waiting on chapter 3

Great author

As always, your story is deliciously erotic and beautifully set. I would comment that the illustrations are not up to your usual standard it seemed. But the story line, having the Mom as his primary lover introducing him to her primary lover is wonderfully creative and seductive. Will his adventures continue, or is this the final installment of his growing desires? To me, the chapter 3 hont is a hopeful tease.

Amazing as always , love how you leave room for character development , more please

So disappointed to reach the end of this chapter. Very well written, and I can’t wait for more!

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Dream weaver !

Hot illustrations!

Every guy's fantasy is to play with two horny girls. I get aroused by a third party, male or female, observing & being a voyeur in front of exhibitionists who enjoy being watched....and then being able to join in on the fun!

I would love an actual man of the house continuation