All Comments on 'Lovely Scars'

This is different. More like a series of thoughts than a story. Keep writing and explore your 5 senses as they relate to relationships. Write what makes you happy and the reader will connect. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Thank you :-D I was very pleased to hear your comment on this story.

In truth they're monologues made to realize erotic ASMR ... the text created in this way acquires perhaps more originality compared to a classic erotic story. Obviously, the thoughts of my protagonist are masculine ..... because I create them for the male voice ;-)

This story is remarkably sensual and enticing!

It reads like poetry and looks like prose....looks can be deceiving....just like scars.

It has a beautiful texture and eroticism.

Thank you for sharing your creative lust.