All Comments on 'Lost Soul'

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this story. I think it was excellent and I look forward to your next work.

Loved this story, the flow of the idea and the way your words breathed life into it was magical, hopefully there will be more to come

I would love to read more of this story. Please continue

I don't normally read the nonhuman category but this story after the first paragraph drew me in. Great story.

First, it took me awhile, bit I FINALLY figured out your name. I won't spoil it for anyone else who is still stumped. 😉

Second, I was going to accuse you of filching a bit too much from a certain isekai anime that I enjoyed watching last year, but I realized that some of the elements of your tale wouldn't fit in that narrative for reasons...but you came damn close.

Finally, I really enjoyed this story. Yeah, it reminded me of some anime I've watched, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Good Job!

Please continue this story. I think it would be fun to rub in in the noble houses nose that Barclay is the one Satan picked to mediate between them. Especially the Pride House.

Really enjoyed this, hope there's a sequel

Great story! Don't know if this is just a one-time story, or will write more chapters, but I would like to see more. We see Hell's view of Barclay, now we need to see Heaven's side, as he steps into the Diplomatic side.

Some minor errors but still a very well written story, I would love to see it turned into a series with Barclay going to heaven and meeting the angels.

I would love to see more of this group of characters.

Loved the story ..,...where else can you take it?

As the title shows, I don't comment often but when I do it's because I definitely like the story, especially yours. 10/10 needs a sequel.

This was a very good story, but... It could have easily been multiple novels. The pacing of everything felt quite rushed.

If you ever have an interest in writing a serialization, this is the story to do it with - Harry Potter in hell.

It is not often that I can read a story about the after life that is so entertaining and not skilled in the Christian nxextus about hell. Thank you. Please continue.

And you've also got a massive set of other stories to read. Happy holiday cheer to everyone finding a new author, or at the very least another wonderful installment from them.

If you'll pardon me jumping on the bandwagon, I too would love to read another slice of story with him working at his new job; Get to read the scene play out that the Mao would burst out in delighted laugher at imagining. Ahh, but I fear I am succumbing to my own sin, cardinal of which in this situation is Gluttony. For I fear there may never be enough to sate me. So instead, I shall:

Thank you very much for sharing your story. Be well, and I look forward to reading more from you.

American currency used in HELL? Jeans in Hell?

The story was very good. Looking forward to the sequel.

This is the first of your work I have read and it is wonderful, albeit a quick read for someone such as myself.

I feel you could easily extend this series way beyond just one seven page story. I understand it is a lot of work and a lot of your time that would be spent. That being said I would just be one among many who'd appreciate it dearly.

Whether or not you choose to make this a much larger series please make sure you treat yourself to something special each and every day and that you make sure to put yourself and your loved ones first. We can wait, you and yours can't. Be there for yourself and those your care for.

Much love, and no matter what path you chose, make the most of the journey.

Really enjoyed this story, except for the rushed, wimpy ending. You needed to pause just after she quit pride and they pledged each other. Chapter 2 could have included much more drama and action before and after he went to work. This was the 4 important weeks you skipped.

Great story really enjoyed it hope mores to come

I hope more inspiration for this story finds you.

anyways is a colloquialism. The word is anyway. Sorry. Just a pet peeve of mine.

I love the story, could there be a 2nd part?

Very enjoyable with very amusing dialogue. Really needs continuing.

Thank You so much. Your talent for writing a tale is outstanding.

I have been ill for a few months. One of few pleasures is reading. Reading this tale has made this day better.

Not to mediate the degree of allowables, but the story has a lot in common with the beginning of Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei

Sort of makes me happy that I'm destined to go to Hell 😂

this 100% deserves another part and more and more. excellent

Too long.I lost interest at the start of Page 3.

This story seems to belong with "Guardian Devil". I hope sincerely, you keep writing! 5 stars.

Faz quase um ano que eu não leio nada de verdade,mas ao me deparar com essa história acabei entrando em um transe,não consegui parar de ler,amei ler cada página,se fosse um livro eu compraria com certeza

Please, for the love of God, Satan, and everything in between, write books.

After ever page I kept saying to myself the story is so damn good! Please write more chapters, this is a universe that I need in my life

This story screams for continuation 😈

Another wonderful, touching story. Thank you for sharing your gift fgmntfmgnshn.

Please we need more of this story. It needs continuation.

Another story needing another chapter or2

I'll throw my hat in the ring for a second chapter / novella too. Fun read. Just going by the synopsis I thought we were looking at some naughty fan fiction of the 'Welcome To Demon School, Iruma-kun!' and/or 'Misfit at Demon Acadamy' manga and anime. But you managed to find a different take on it. Thanks, chief :)

This is by far my favorite story of yours and definitely needs sequels.

Great story, a unique topic which was nice. This could easily be turned into a series, or perhaps just receive a sequel, but I think this is one of those rare cases where I think the slightly ambiguous ending is right.