All Comments on 'Locked Out of Apartment'

Holy shit that’s a hot story!!!!

Also a good time when I see a new story of yours pop up! Can’t wait to read what happens next!

Straight forward fantasy of a 3some with 2 trans, very nice.

More, please!

Luv this story. Would love to be the slut between these goddesses!

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ It’s like a hot sexy dream. Can’t wait for more!

Solid 5/5. Please continue this story!

I want to meet these two ladies. Dani and Lily sound like they could rock anyone's world. They can spit-roast this gurl.

For the next one he should be fucking them

10/10

Omg I absolutely loved this hot sexy story. It vividly brought back my memories of my past threesomes with sexy gurls. Can’t wait to read more.

You have outdone yourself on this one. Unbelievably hot 🔥

I like the story, the characters and your writing style. Nice to see an author here right a real trans gender story as opposed to a cross dressing or sissy story. Not that there is anything wrong with those, but if you are into real trans gender that's what you look for.. I'll be checking out your other submissions and look forward to this one continuing.

I hope theres another one cumming soon

This is very hot as usual from you , but maybe just maybe , you need to focus more on finishing some of your old stories that we still are waiting for new chapters of them .

I think Im in love with Dani. Jesus balls this is so hot!! MoRE pLz!!!

Such an amazing story. Wish I was the guy getting fucked. Wooooow. Please continue

Seriously nearly blew my load just from the imagery (no touching) very well written, great imagery, and of course fucking hot as hell.

Very well written and tremendously erotic. I'd love to be the guy in the story. More please!

What a great fucking story. Who wouldn't love to have this happen to them?

sign me up to move in next to them :)

This story is so hot! I love the writing, the storyline, all of it. After reading it, I had to go to Chatturbate and fine a hot trans to be with. I hope there is a next time.

Wow! What a great story. No surprise that it won because 5 stars seemed hardly enough. Not only was it impeccably written but the characters were so honest, respectful and compassionate. I loved everything about this story, especially the steamy sex. Well done.

What a dream for another lifetime. I'd love to be one of the girls - roommates and fuck buddies who seduce willing fucktoys for mind-blowing evenings....I

Thanks for the fantasy!

Phew! What's not to like? There are two things I look for in an erotic story: A fully developed story, with real characters who feel like they're doing real things, and incredibly steamy sex. I rarely find the two together, but this one hit it out of the park. Extra brownie points because the characters were smart, mutually respectful, and ridiculously sexual all at the same time. It felt human. You mentioned "to be continued...." DON'T TEASE

I sure hope this happened for real for some lucky slut. I got off twice THANKS. Tom/Tammy

Mmmm, I need more stars to properly rate this story.

I hope your 'to be continued' comes true... several times. One chapter could be the next phase of the rolling sex party, where the girls swap on him in whatever kinky way tickles your fancy. Another chapter could be a week or so later. Will Layton stay open minded and engaged with these beautiful people? Will they stay under the radar or will they lead him (take him?) into the open as the sexy, submissive guy he enjoyed being in this story? So many options. Whichever you choose, I know I'll enjoy.

Pulling on my 5" hard dick now!

Lovely writing. "Everything was as sensitive as the initial discovery of sin." It is fantastic lines like this that make me wonder what you could do with all sorts of interesting subject matter...keep it up!

you're my favorite writer on this site. another tremendously sexy effort.

I love your writing. "Being impaled like this had made my own cock trigonometry hard.." 😁 So much fun and so very hot.

This was so incredibly hot!!!! Especially since I had a similar experience years ago. I was on a dating site. I wrote to a girl I thought was a genetic female. She was absolutely GORGEOUS! We went to dinner. I was having one of the best dates of my life. I reached over and grabbed her hands at the table and noticed how big they were. I paused and put it all together. She said "OMG..did you not know I am trans"? I said no. But I waived down the waiter and ordered another bottle of wine. Then said "All I know is I am having the best time tonight. And I don't want it to end". We went back to her place and I had one of the hottest sexual experiences of my life. After the date, we chatted more online. I asked her why her profession said "entertainment". She told me a line about being a makeup artist. Weeks later, I was watching Trans porn, as I had a new found appetite. There she was..one of the biggest(in many ways) trans porn stars in the world! I had started to fall in love with her. But the whole pornstar/civilian conundrum played out, as I felt uneasy about her going off to fuck other guys for the day, and come home exhausted with sex the furthest from her mind. But hands down one of the hottest relationships I have ever had! Thank you for this wonder reminder. It was enveloping.

Loved it!!

Soo hot I’m jealous

Amazing story. And I’m not really into trans. But wow.

Thank you

Amazing story!! Please continue writing about Layton’s experiences.

You should write a story with a trans guy! Would be so hot.

Amazing story!! Please continue writing

Wow I'm only on page 3 that is insanity hot.

Wow made it to page 4 wow thank you very much.

Fantastic in every way. Thank you!

gonna do a part 2??

Very beautiful and sexy cinema!

This would be a dream come true!!! I hope you wrap second part or more

That boy was in total heaven that night! Awesome story!

Please make this a series ❤️😈

"...fully thunked against my G spot like a bumper car with a vendetta."

Nicely done.

That was one of the hottest stories I have read ! Now I need to wipe up my cum !

Please, Don`t stop the Roll! I`d love a Part 2.

Hotshot... Lucky Layton; ruggedly impressive story

So fucking incredible, Layton is the luckiest person alive, and I am very annoyed there isn't a part two to this amazing story😔

Loved it

A Dream Life

Damn good story ! Wishing it was me they were pounding ! I had a similar experience in Vegas with 2 trans escorts. Now I’d love a repeat performance !!

Hoping the next part is done very soon!

Only in my dreams did something close to this happened! First we’d been pounding JD all day and feelin real good. Durning our drinking we talked about having anal sex. I said no when they all giggled. Well one thing led to another when the three TG’s and two female impersonators asked me to try on their lingerie, sure why not. I had a lacy black bra and garter belt put on. Double D silicone boobs were put into the bras pockets. The stockings were rolled up my legs and attached, the matching lacy black panties were next. Once I was dressed and dolled up with lipstick, eyelashes and shadow and a wig. I was then taken to a padded horse. I started to get on it like a cowboy but they stopped me by tying my spread ankles to the rear legs and pulling my hands to be lashed on the front ones. I’m thinkin somethings strange is going on but the booze said NAAAA!

Cocks were put in my mouth to warm them up, naaa get ‘em hard for the acomin fuckin. To shorten the story my virgin ass was fucked twelve times that night. I gave ten swallowing blow jobs with two facials to them and their friends who dropped by. I had so much cum in me no ass lube was needed.

It was an amazing night.

This would be my fucking dream come true. If this happened to me I would have checked off number 1 on my sexual bucket list and I could die a happy man. LOL However, I will NEVER get that lucky. Very hot story though. Looking for part 2. ;-)

Damn. If only…

I’ve been fucked by one trans girl before, but never two at the same time. OH MY GOD whar a fantastic time that would be.

I can’t wait to read the next chapter in this saga, part one was so freaking awesome.

I’m begging for more more more just like Layton. 😛

Very lucky Layton, I loved your story, more please

If beautiful girls all had plump, tasty cocks, I'd have permanent stretch marks aroundmy mouth and walk bow legged.

Part two please. Love this story.

Now this is the tyoe of fantasy one wishes could be a reality. Loved it want more please!

Mmmm love this story such passion such lust filled thoughts playing out in writing! Loving it…..I might be a woman but I couldn’t think of anything better than a woman with a hard cock!! Mmmm best of both worlds! Thx for sharing x

This is such a hot story and if I had an opportunity like this, I definitely would love it

Damn, that was hot!

Very nice, and very hot!

Good grief, that was spectacular, thank you!

can't wait for the next chapter! well done.

Loved it can't wait for more

to be honest, most of the first page was a little tedious to read through; but oh my was it so important to be there for the rest of the story. very well written and i do so hope there is more to cum...

I am like Layton and normally a straight guy or bi with some sexy couples but usually i am the top but being sandwiched by two incredibly hot trans girls is a twisted fantasy as a 80/20 dom guy who with even one trans i would be on top as i am pretty close to being a virgin in only having a gf who would finger me while giving head or a pencil one after i had fucked her ass. But if there are two Venus Lux's or a blonde and brunette babes that had Lily and Dani's beauty and seductivenesss then like Layton i would be putty in their hands and submit. would enjoy a part 2. There is one trans lady i know that if she had a hot friend i would be an eager boytoy as the story was just like my fantasy. email me if any hot roomies exist like this

Great story I felt as though I was right there with the three of them

I stayed aroused the whole story and wish I was on Layton's place. The only thing I would have done that he didn't do is rim and finger each of those beauties. I would have begged if necessary

Thank you for writing this erotic and arousing story.

Amazing, I so wanted to be Layton, being fucked by 2 Trans Women, until they were finished with me xxx Kaye

Can't wait for more of this story, I wish I could of taken Layton's place, fuck such a good story

Love to read more, leytons a lucky guy. I need neighbours like this.

I want to marry Lily. Sounds so sweet and sexy all in one package.

Best dam story yet came 2 times go ok no to read it again the thought I so want my virgins ass taken that way DAM”

One lucky dude!!! So fucking HOT !!!

Awesome story and it needs to continue! Would love this to happen to me over a long weekend!

Great job!

Really enjoyed the scene setting and the description of the looks of the main characters. Looking forward to:the next part.

This is just so fucking hot! LOVE it.

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Scorchin' HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

PLEASE finish So hard for the next part

This is, without a doubt, the most erotic and exciting story ever. Why can't this happen to me ??????

A true dream cum true. Oh to be young again. It's been so long since my last encounter that I've forgotten the magic feeling of shecock filling my holes, and the exhilaration of shecum coating my throat and blasting my bowels.

We WANT chapter 2 of this amazing story.

Please

I want MORE!!!!!

Just loving it 💖

Would love a follow up to this one!

Solid 10. Great experience.

Part 2, Please ! 💖💖💖💖💋💋💋💋💋💋✌

Seriously, best story ever! So jealous

Who ever said that insanely hot erotic literature is always void of truly skilled writing? It wasn’t me!

Your use of similes, rhythm and metaphors in ‘locked out of my apartment’ was off the chain Slutty. “Everything was as sensitive as the initial discovery of sin” will be one I’ll always remember, by the way! Do us all a favor and please, please continue this one!!

Great story!! Insanely hotttt!!!! 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐!! I wished I'd been Layton. Would love to get spit roasted by two trans like that! Eager for a part 2. Wonder how thing will progress when the drugs wear off. Will Layton continue with the girls? Will be deny it ever happened?? Should be a great sequel.

Holy smokes!!!! That was 🔥!

CRAZY hot!!! You are such a talented storyteller. This story deserves so much more credit and possibly a follow up ;)

Just fantastic. A shitty turn of luck turned into something amazing - my favorite kind of story.

Heaven, just heaven.

BEST STORY EVER!!!!