All Comments on 'Life Anew'

But still worth five stars. Thanks for the story.

Thanks for sharing.

How about a new story with some Cajun dialect, when you feel like it?

I love the story, only complaint I have is that it ended rather abruptly. Would like to have seen more of the shift in feeling from John toward Belle. Also would have been nice to give more details on Belle's transition. But damn good read. Hope to see more of this story in the future.

please write more like this one it is really good hope for more

I always look forward to reading your work. Yet another great story, thank you for sharing it with us.

Excellent writing. Loved it.

Ended super abruptly, if this is indeed the end. Else...

Good start. When is Part 2 due?

I love how Belle could cum while sucking others and how riding her small toy in the shower she would spurt. I so want to meet a woman like her!

WOW this was magnificent!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story thank you.

Nicole was Nicholas, Polly was Paul, and Emily was Emily (not everything has to change!).

Sorry

Loved this story, the way you developed it was good and the ending, realistic as young people get over their prejudices and follow their hearts. Looking forward to further submissions. A suggestion is don't rely on spell checker invest in a program that also corrects grammar.

5 stars for the story development and flow. Throughout the story, it was a good read, however, like others, I would have to agree that it ended rather quickly. It felt a little like you had a great idea, fleshed it out to something wonderful, and then threw something in to call it done.

probably the best writer on lit, JBs "loving wives" stories are the best, but testament to his story telling skills i now read everything he writes, even categories i normally wouldn't read. brilliant story 5*

Great story. (ended abrubtly, however).

Biggest scare was that I thought John was growing pot!