All Comments on 'Let Sleeping Beauties Lie'

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Dar_JisboDar_Jisboover 4 years ago
Mr. Bate never learns :)

He already got killed once by a pretty woman in H-space. Given a second chance, he made the same mistake.

Great story as always.

LingweLingweover 4 years ago
great to hear from you again!

I have to say that I prefer your more sensual, gentle seduction with a twist kind of stories, but nevertheless I'm glad to see something new from you! Thanks

YshomatsuYshomatsuover 4 years ago

Got what he deserved he did! I can't wait for the stories to link together and we find out the reason behind the same name used over and over. I remember you hinting at it before but I know that'll be a good story when you write it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
nice :-)

nice story ... it is always fun to see when idiots get what their stupidity has earned for them

good to see you back on lit again, it has been a while

it would be very nice if you could start book 3 of Succubus Summoning ... like you said in your note at the end of Bk 2, you had deliberately left some story threads open

roftlheoryroftlheoryover 4 years ago
Fun horror

I really enjoyed the exposition in the beginning. You started off with an interesting hook and then went back to talk about how Bate got there. The erotic parts were very good and I liked the descriptions of the monster as well as the ending. Hope to read more from you soon.

airesseekingairesseekingalmost 4 years ago
seduced to his death

I love it when sexy women seduce men to their death, So very naughty. Great story

Black_and_White_WriterBlack_and_White_Writeralmost 4 years ago

A very naughty tale, and not too intensive on the gore, it is erotic horror after all, something many authors forget. I love it and I love your great writing. Thank you again for your wonderful work and good to know you’re still writing.

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