All Comments on 'Late Ch. 02'

Amazing story beautiful character development! I really hope terry turns out to be a t-girl too!

Wish I was taken like that by a sexy hung angel!

This was a wonderful read really would enjoy more of this sexy couple

great story. looking forward to the next chapter. also very much disagree with the other commentor, deff. do not want to see terry as a t-girl. thanks for sharing.

Thank you, what a great scene.

after so much time, finally a really worth piece of amazing story... the dominance and wildness in your stories are beyond anyone fantasies

all of your stories are great

my favorite is a shemale flatmate part2

but in the art of writing and describing this one was the best story ever that i did read in my life

11 from 10

hoping more stories from you

love and peace <3

Please please please write another chapter!

I absolutely love this story and can't wait until part 3. I love that he knows he's a submissive immediately and how she is so excited while testing his boundaries.

I see a lot of kinky, sexy fun in the future!

I really enjoyed how Freddie was reluctant to be Jane's bottom bitch, but ultimately couldn't resist the pleasure. That's a very fun dynamic! And I'm really looking forward to what's going to happen now that Jane is taking on the role of not just Freddie's coach, but also his Mummy. I also really like how exclusive their relationship is, it seems like they're make just for each other. One request, whenever you finally have time to write chapter 3, can we get some more specific measurements of just how big Jane is?

Needs more in the series! Keep up the good work.

Nice descriptions. Vivid imagery. Seemed so real, I, wished I was there!

awesome, loved it. hope u write ch 3 soon, and he needs to drink lots of mommy's special milk..:P

I liked part 1, and although the coach was forward there was obvious consent. In this second part consent was totally absent. I couldn't even finish the story. There is a huge gap between domination/reluctance and non-consent/rape. I know some people like stories with non-consent elements, but I would have appreciated a warning or something at the beginning.

What's a bummer is that i was really liking this story until the coach decided that Fred was no longer a person and only an object to satisfy her desires. There was good character development and there were various ways that Jane could have wooed Fred, even if she has a penis and was worried about his reaction to it.

You are the author, and you're going to write what you write, I just wish the "futa on male" tag had more intimacy and romance and less non-consent and objectification. Good writing overall on your part though.

One of my all time faves hope you write a part 3 :)

Hope you write more. I loved it.

This is one of the best shemale stories out there. Please please please put out another chapter

This was truly well thought out, from creating the erotic world to going into great detail about the sex itself making it as long as you need to, you should be proud

One of the best shemale stories I have read in a while. The massage scene and reveal was extremely erotic.

Wish I was Fred.

Would have been better if there was some love on her part and less verbal humiliation, especially when it wasn't private. Oh well! Chap 1 was a 5, but this one had too much emphasis on humiliation so only a 3.

Hot and sexy - has me hard in my panties

'Nother goody from thereshegoes123

Love it

One of the best episodes on Literotica. The balance between domination, willingness of the sub, the writing, the tempo is all just right.

One more dominant dick girl story with the same, "going to make you my bitch" theme this sight already has too many of.

2 stars.

Absolutely great story.

Good story, but the terminology is wanting, in obvious ways. There is no “4th base” in baseball or softball. It’s called “home plate.” And there is no “keeper” at home plate; that’s soccer (football). It’s called the “catcher.”

And Freddie’s first inning “home run,” would not have been scored as a “home run,” but rather as a “triple,” with the batter/runner taking home plate on an error by the “catcher.”

And baseball/softball is referred to as a “game,” played on a “field, as opposed to a “match,” played on a “pitch” as in soccer/football.

I was right! This is an awesome series that you've written! Totally hot and sexy!