All Comments on 'Lady in Red Ch. 31'

A classic example of incorrectly using "that" for "who" is in the last sentence of this chapter. The sentence reads the country wants to succumb to Bond, not the female spy. Should have used "who".

more like being a prick

He just keeps on keeping on. Great series.

HDK,

You are the best. But, I won't read this until it's done. Gotta have it all at once. I'm dying for the ending. How many more chapters are planned if I can ask.

Again, keep it up.

Matt Moreau

I am loving this series. I just need you to write faster. ha ha You have a wonderful way with your scenarios and just the right timbre to each scene. I really enjoy it.

Can't get enough. Just keeping track of the harem screws me up.

Looking forward to the Russian trip challenging Steve's crisis management skills.

Keep it up.

I'm sure the OTHER Mr. anonymous was really just volunteering to proofread your stories for you. What a great guy.

You write good stories. I particularly liked "In My Life". A little Steve in that guy.

Can't wait fir the next chapter.

What else can I say...?

?????????????????is this all of the story

this is another great chapter. are we getting close to ch. 32 and 33

More than thirty days. Hope you are OK. It's time for 32

I just spent the last few days re-reading all the chapters in this story. I have actually read it all 3 times now. It still draws me in and I love it as I anxiously wait for chapter 32. once again I say congratulations on your excellent writing skills. Thank you so much for writing this.

Gary

OK, I'll admit it. I'm anxious where is 32? I need my fix.

Excellent story, one of the best i've read in a while. hope the next chapters will be coming soon

wow, I've almost lost my girlfriend, better I make out with the family!

"I've been to an inaugural ball, the White House for a state dinner, Paris for modeling, Los Angeles to be in a TV show, Florida to watch a movie being made, and pretty soon to Russia to attend another state dinner,"

I think that this is one of the best stories I have ever read. The characters are people to me. Not just characters in a story. I find myself anxious to see what will happen next.

Steve runs to save Qwen from a photo shoot so he must be dressed and swims out in his clothes.Then when it is all over he heads back to finish filming in his wet clothes?.Attention to detail as as been seen in previous chapters ,is not this authors strong point.

I’m obviously late to the party as an additional 30+ chapters have been posted to date so it’s very possible that the story will play out exactly as described below, but I wonder since it was not mentioned in this chapter if the harrowing rip tide rescue isn’t a missed opportunity to provide “real” footage for the movie that is being filmed. There’s cameras everywhere and the scene where Gwen rushes into the surf to save the child followed by Steve rushing in to save both from the rip tide could have been used in the movie to cement the two characters feelings. First he witnesses her character and that of her family standing up for the one handed waitress only to be fortified by her selfless rescue attempt of the drowning boy. Surely there were enough cameras present and filming to provide the footage they would need to include this scene in a film.

Just more repetitive crap.

It's officially time for these kids to save up money for their future. They've given all of their money thus far. But these people at the hospital need to tell them enough is enough and force them to keep their checks.

Short and sweet.

Excellent story, cannot get enough of it.

5/5

I love Kate's character !