All Comments on 'Justin Thyme Ch. 06'

This is going to be a work of art when it is finished. The speed is perfect but I hate to have to keep waiting for the next chapter.

Thank you!!

Seems a threesome with Steph in the shower is the next logical place for the story to go.

I enjoy your story and I just like the way you are slowly developing the story. To many time I had read story where the writer either rush it or lose track. But you have a good feel as to how you want your story to go. I'm like other readers who can't wait for the next chapter. It seem like Justin, Rosemary and Stephanie are growing closer. It would be nice to see what happens next for the three of them. Also would like to know what happens to Susie. So please don't take to long to post the next chapter and maybe make it a little longer.

keeps getting better and better!

I love your writing and do appreciate the slow build up but man I wish there was more of this story to read!

Great story hope you can continue!

Absolutely AMAZING.

That's the only thing that I can say about this story. I just love it and can't help it.

... if you had a proof-reader and an Editor to help and advise you it could have been far better!!

I've given you 4* but it could have been tops!

Go to "Literotica"; "Index"; "Volunteer Editors" and get someone to help you!

Rates a five But because your teasing me I only gave you a four, six chapters and you leave it hanging like that?

I am fully enjoying your story and find myself anxiously looking forward to each chapter. While there are an occasional minor grammatical error, I find them to be a non-issue to the integrity and readability of the story itself. I rated a 5 for the overall quality of the story telling.

This is a great series and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I have loved your story so far and almost impatiently wait for each new chapter.

I really wish this were a book. And you for sure cannot just leave it off here. It reads so nicely and everything is paced perfectly. I am begging you for more chapters!

hope rose and justin can end up being together happily and forever! great work keep it up!

I like this series a lot. I can't wait to find out what happens with the four. I hope Susie is going to be fine. I look forward to the continuation.

I love the story as well. I can't wait for more.

I think that when they design the security system for the new house, he ought to place a Koala in each bedroom!

And speaking of Koala's, I get the impression that Rosemary knows that the one in her bedroom has the camera installed.

He's going to get in trouble for Mr. Koala

Great story, looking forward to more chapters!

This is my favorite serie of all.. Wonderfully written..

Great story but how long are you going to keep us waiting for more

There are so many ways this could go bad, and you have avoided them all. Very well paced (a trifle frustrating for those of us who want it all now) continuing sweet and romantic, with enough sex but not too much. You have a very deft hand.

Considering they've only shared a bed one night, its getting pretty old how angsty they are getting with all the 'I missed you last night' and 'I couldnt sleep' etc. ..not very realistic to me. Yeah, sure it would be great to have been able to, but this seems a bit over the top and sappy.

Other minor note, she commented on how she couldnt get off b/c steph was sleeping in her bed. Didnt all three of the girls just stand in her room and jill off in front of each other the other day? Doing it in the dark under the covers next to a drugged up girl is a piece of cake ;)

Everything else rocked! Looking forward to the next installment or twenty! ;)

New house: pinhole cameras in all of the rooms and bathrooms? Motion/sound detection auto-record to disk! Pherehormone spray despenser mounted in the common rooms (just kidding! Saw that one in another story;)

Oh! I see a hidden room or tunnel coming up in his new attic room behind the bookcases, yay!

You are a grand story teller, and I'm enjoying every word, sentence, and nuance. As you may have noticed, I'm not moving through the chapters very fast.

Sorry to only be able to give 5 stars, so here are a few more,*****.

You are missed. I just read you passed away. To your family I pray for them.

Hey, I just realised that Justin and Rosemary's parents could have been even more corny, by calling Rosemary "Rosemary-Anne Thyme" (Rosemary and Thyme). 😂 Then again I don't think Rosemary's middle name is ever mentioned, so maybe it is Anne.