All Comments on 'IM Leads to Incest'

I can see this happening. The writing is very good with excellent descriptions.

From the last lines, I trust there will be a sequel.

Easily one of the most descriptive reading I've read, the attention to detail in the story draws the reader into the possibility of the event. Doesn't leave much for the reader to imagine!

THE DESCRIPTION OF THE LOVE MAKING WAS DONE WELL HOWEVER, YOU RUSHED THE START OF THE STORY . FROM THE FATHER READING OVER HER SHOULDER TO THEIR FIRST TOUCHES WENT TO QUICKLY . THE DAUGHTER OPENLY TELLING HER DAD THAT SHE WAS WRITING TO A GUY HIS AGE WHILE THINKING IT WAS HIM IS A LITTLE HARD TO SWALLOW ?????

Wow, this was really awful. Very cliched and sophomoric. There wasn't an original thought or phrase uttered in this.

omggggggg that was so hottttttttttttttt...i felt like i was right there (giggles) cant wait for your next chapter..By the way....i'm looking for a Daddyyy..*smiles*

patti

mtnman you have done it again!! That was VERY well written!! Such detail!! I could visualize it so well!! I am so horny now that I will have to go take care of that!!

I am so glad you have posted yet another hot story!!

MMMMMMMMMMMMMM keep up the great writing!!

I can't wait to read what happens in the shower!! I do hope you continue with this one!!

That was wonderful!

Janet

mntman is one of my favorite authors in lit. I find myself aways searching for more of his stories. This one was one of his greats. The description to detail makes one feel they are right there living the story. Great work mntman, you could be my daddy anytime...i would look up into your eyes and whisper..take me daddy make me your babygirl.

*smiles* your babygirl

Very hot...very sexy...

~Honey

Once again, I am compelled to comment on one of your stories, mtnman. What a feeling it must be to know what your writing does to readers like me. Thank you for a most pleasurable experience.

I got to fuck my 14 y/o that way but she was not on the pill but iI cam in her just tfor the pleasure of knowing that I could get her prego. & I still am

this story was hotter than hot, it was sizzling. thanks.

rubbish

Garbage. Not the least bit believable. Way too rushed. Couldn't the author have added another two pages to give us SOME resolution. I'm sorry, I won't be back to him.

I liked the story just fine! What I don't understand about the negative comments here is that most of them aren't even trying to be constructive, they just seem angry and hateful, like they're just trying to take the misery, hate and anger in their own life and crap it out all over you, thinking somehow it will make them feel better! Rofl.

Anyway my only 'complaint', if you will, is about the whole virginity thing. If she still had a hymen to rip in there then he surely would have realised it when he started shoving his two thick man fingers up inside her!! Hehehe! I suppose he could have been too out of it to realize he had blood on his fingers first. Oh well, was still good anyway! I'm surprised there wasn't a follow-up chapter where he actually put his gear to better use than that, hehe. Oh well, thanks for writing and sharing with us!!

went over my head too convoluted and unreal in the least. WAY TOO RUSHED!!! can not connect to anything.

After getting off while reading this story, I got my Dad to read it while his cock fucked me from behind. He filled me with his seed just as he read the last chapter.

HATE THIS STYLE OF WRITING

Absolutely zero story to this piece of crap. Simply an abrupt sex sequence without an ounce of segue . . . .