All Comments on 'Ice Hockey 101 Ch. 02'

...that Josh would come around. :) Loved the story.

Will there be more or perhaps yet another Ice story? After all, hockey season has only just begun! :)

So glad he came around! Awesome story..mmm so passionate. Hope you write a chapter 3

This is a beautiful romantic story with excellent development of the main characters and a tight focus on the sport of ice hockey providing the raison d'etre for the story. It was delicately told with substantial insights into the characters' motivations and feelings. I thought it was delightful. Thank you.

Very romantic. I love ice hockey and a romantic tale.

What a follow-up. It was beautiful and I think that was the longest sex scene you've ever written.. It was sizzling hot too!

Thanks for the cameos of "Sean" and Amelia. "Sean's" my fave player because he is The Next One, just talented.

We're all showing love for the other Pens too.. Keep them stories coming!

I liked it, it was not as believable or well edited as some of your other stories, though few romances are believable anyhow. Still, i do like the hockey theme :)

I have never read your stories before, and after reading Ice Hockey 101, I went back to the first Ice stories and read all of them. There I found out about the characters real life counterparts. Since I know ABSOLUTELY NOTHING about hockey I had fun searching Google trying to find out who these characters were "inspired" by. I love the stories and characters,the fact that I had a face to go with the character, and the little treasure hunt I went on.

Dunno how he could think that social science was a 'smart' subject at the start - but who cares. It was a great read.

..so delicately and beautifully written.

Hockey and romace, the perfect combination. Sadly not many write those kind a stories. You're a great example that it can work. Keep up the good work!!

I don't know what it is about reading such a wonderful story but they don't come along often and I just relished every bit of this adorable story.

I think I shall pine artistically for a 'Josh' since he seems like the perfect man...seriously!

Love your writing - keep it up!

This has to be, hands down, one of my favorite hockey stories so far! Josh and Rebecca just seem so real. It makes me want a hockey player just like him, all for my own. *sigh* Oh well. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for a great story~

It would be great to see Josh and Rebecca go further. Maybe even drop a hockey baby or 2. I love these 2.

No that you need them but it might be interesting to see Josh's brother Eric's story develop as Josh and Rebecca head to the altar or even Cam's story from uncovering ice and of course Drew's story from Melting the Ice or is it back on the ice. You know what I mean.

love where you left it, leaves enough to the imagination while still ending with a real and beautiful relationship between them which we know will last. great balance, thanks :D

Jordan staal, nice. Id read one about Sid too, i mean Sean...

But I loved the story. You can't write one about Crosby, he's too busy whining for a woman to find him attractive. Now one about a certain Flyers goalie with sexy blue eyes, now *there's* a story!

Totally hot story.

amazing, i loved it! thank u so much for sharing! i love your characters and their interactions in all of your stories. please keep making more you are one of my favorite authors!

As a huge Pens fan, I will never watch a game the same way again. So so hot.

I love your stories, the way your introduce the characters and make us like them, the way the characters interacted together. I just submit my first story, I hope I'll be able to write as well as you. Maybe, if you can, I'll be able to ask you or Pennlady to edit my stories, because I do really love your way of writing. Thank you for those lovely hockey stories. I hope you won't stop anytime soon. Keep us dreaming... :)

9. Keeping Ice on the Wound (MG and Hilary):

http://www.literotica.com/s/keeping-ice-on-the-wound

Maybe an update since there's been a trade with Pens? :-)

I really empathized with Rebecca and I guess that's why I was a little disappointed that she forgave Josh so quickly and easily. I could see if he apologized a day or two later, but wasn't it more like two weeks? I would've loved for him to find her at the pub meeting a new guy and Josh having to win her back. (Yeah, I'm a little vindictive)

It's Lady Falcon down in warm and sunny SC. I was thinking about you and your hockey players yesterday and decided to come back for a visit tonight. *shivering and grinning like a fool* they are still just as delicious as I remember. Merry Christmas! And thank you. Lol. I enjoyed my visit with my favorite hockey players.

Pls can dis story have a chapter 3?

So very hot and romantic, couldn't stop reading. Love this series of hockey stories so far! Easy 5*

I really enjoy your stories and they're hot, but I wish your characters had more depth. What social science is Rebecca studying? Why is she studying it? All your hockey players do is play and have sex. They don't have any hobbies? One of them's not into woodworking or something else, or has a quirk like loving punk rock or classical music?

Well-written and delightful!

Highly recommended! ~ 5+ ~

Oh, yeah. Time for Ice Hockey 201…

WAUW !

Thanks for sharing ;-)

Sweet but the drama seemed manufactured.