by RejectReality
Great Christmas theme and a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
Well written too. I hope you do well in the contest. Thanks.
Great story. It was very well written with good character development. I'd love to see a sequel where the four of them are together, with all the possibilities that holds.
This is awesome! I love when I get notifications that you've published something new. This doesn't disappoint!
If I have a complaint, it is that the tale is too short. I enjoyed it, so will be looking for you out here. Thank you... I won't say you made my day, but you surely didn't hurt it!
I loved your story. Is there a part 2 in the works? It's so, anxiously await it.
Many older women underestimate their ability to attract younger guys. Often it takes some encouragement but once they get the first one confidence improves. the women that have tried really enjoy it.
The Very Best Christmas Presents cum unwrapped and are remembered LONG afterwards. Thank You!
...to know more about the niece, and what she's doing in bed :-)
I loved the little humor at the end with the niece showing up with the brother. Absolutely adorable. I’ve been in Gloria’s shoes so I understand what it means to have a stud suddenly look at you that way. All I can say is . . . Good for Gloria!!! Please keep writing, loved it!!
What I didn't like was... The worst feeling ever is pulling out and cumming any where except in her pussy. THAT is NOT erotic to cum on her body. It's more like disgusting/cheap to me. He is probably gay.
Your thoughts on where they come are narrow minded. Everyone has different triggers and turn ons. I'm surprised she did t use a condom, but it's fiction. I'm married and monogamous, but I find my husband coming on my back sexy. He finds it cheap. We meet in the middle. As stated previously, everyone is different. Your triggers have NOTHING to do with your sexual preference.
Loved the hair on Nick''s chest and the amount of cum he produced. Next time, shoot his cum inside her!