All Comments on 'Hotel Mothers -- Illustrated!'

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HeyAllHeyAllabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for reading. I hope you've enjoyed this. Once again, thanks to the highly talented annabellebrito for the amazing artwork.

take care,

heyall

VisitorAnonVisitorAnonabout 2 years ago

Great story. Sexy. Love the set up. Could definitely use a follow up chapter or three.

UnclenoodleUnclenoodleabout 2 years ago

Excellent art. Fits the story perfectly. Ripe for a sequel

james1801james1801about 2 years ago

Very impressive, I enjoyed it immensely. Can't wait for the next part. 👍

76fellow4876fellow48about 2 years ago

I find stories that involve people who are open to possibilities to be enjoyable. At the same time, it does remind me of how anal-retentive American society is in regards to physical contact. Back in the 196s, I was involved with two communes that were starting to work on the issues and became one of the leaders in sensitivity exercises working to address the fears. I know how difficult it is as to giving oneself the OK to be human completely.

I am amused and dismayed as to how even swinger groups prohibit contacts that "go against" the indoctrination from childhood. For example, two males getting worked up with each other and family groupings. Automatic expulsion.

Thanks for the story, with illustration.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

One of the few stories on this site where a sequel would be almost necessary. Great work and artwork too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

“ a real life mom/son blowjob-fest!”

My favorite line in the story. That’s a party I’d like to be in!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story. Five stars for sure. There is some room for some more or not, as you feel it. I'd read some more with great pleasure.

obscure72obscure72about 2 years ago

Good story. It calls for another chapter though..

Mr_BradyMr_Bradyabout 2 years ago

This is great erotica...writing and illustrations combined!!

Five stars 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 ❤

Paul4playPaul4playabout 2 years ago

Fun story!

Artwork adds immense pleasure and eroticism to the plot.

Would love a sequel….

annabellebritoannabellebritoabout 2 years ago

Thank you to those that commented. There are a few unused images that we did not include due to the story evolving over time. I'm thinking of posting them on the site with some context regarding each scene. There is a two one is complete with a very different outcome to the story and another is Grace witnessing something shocking. I'll post them on Literotica soon. Thanks for enjoying my art.

ccs29745ccs29745about 2 years ago

Interesting take on the hotel circumstances for the room. Good story and good start to possible great series.

Camguy4funCamguy4funabout 2 years ago

Terrific! And the illustrations are amazing. So well done!

dwr0242dwr0242about 2 years ago

I hope there is more to cum!

beth48beth48about 2 years ago

Would love for mom/son play Dr. with medical equipment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just recognition that , " It's a damn if you do - damn if you don't world .

AaroneousAaroneousabout 2 years ago

Good story. Great art work. Thank you.

Crusader235Crusader235about 2 years ago

Very Hot mom son story. Reminds me of another story where Moms take their Sons on vacation with them. Sure hope there's more to this story coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The illustrations are good. The tensions between Mom’s avowed Lesbianism and her desire for her son’s cock is both amusing and dramatic. I look forward to the Son starting to date. And Mom wanting to fuck both her Son to establish dominance over the interloper, but also because she truly bisexual and has the hots for her future, potential daughter-in-law.

kurrginatorXkurrginatorXabout 2 years ago

Original and hot. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Silly enough to be fun.

Five stars.

Like the illustrstion, I think they are the same as Cruise Ship mom.

Lancs50Lancs50almost 2 years ago

A good story. I was hoping for a deeper dive into the mon/son pool of self discovery. But, overall, a good begging and a very erotic topic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

There is one mom I would love to send to this hotel - my ex. She emasculated my son so badly she should have to make a man out of him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Original sensual sexual of love between mother & son with extra enjoyment of both. Enjoyable to point of wondering where such hotel might be for future release

CharletteCharlettealmost 2 years ago

If i were trying to write or print this reply you would not be able to decipher the comment due to my shaking.

I think this was some of the silliest, yet somehow most arousing incest writing i have read here on Lit.

Normally within the first few lines I begin to find spelling errors, incomplete sentences, posting the same word twice as well as my pet peeve, The astounding over use of "AND" as a conjunctive where none is necessary or should have been replaced by maybe a better word or phrase. But I was so into the story I did not notice a single one of the aforementioned errors.

If there was something bad about this story, it had to be the abrupt "End" !

I thought that to be a cruel move to the readers by the author.

Interesting !

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Would love to see a part 2 in which Grace tells Robert that they have conference and need to go back for 4 nights to the same accommodations because everywhere else was booked. Grace admits just prior to the trip that there is no conference and that she couldn't stop thinking about what happened. Robert admits that he also has been thinking about it. Both agree that the trip will occur. Grace mentions that when booking, the manager explained that things will be more intense and open for return guests.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the illustrations. The naked mature woman being pounded from behind is smoking hot.

UngjeservirayUngjeservirayover 1 year ago

Beautiful! Please may we have Chapter 2?This must go further! Maybe her Son has her pregnant already.?

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 1 year ago
Amazing in every way

Every illustration was perfect for the the activity going one. One of the most sensual stories I've ever read.

annabellebritoannabellebritoabout 1 year ago

Annabelle here, I do have one unused alternative ending illustration as well as two unfinished images. I have tried to submit them here, but have not been able to under the erotica art section. Oh well...if anyone is interested, contact me directly on here. Please continue to support Literotica by leaving comments and rating the wonderful stories on here.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I like the story, I would love for it to be updated with newer / better illustrations and the inclusion of an abundance of pussy hair on the ladies.

Viejo_ChingonViejo_Chingon10 months ago

Wow! This is one hot story. Sorry, Anonymous, be thankful you have illustrations. I thought they were pretty good, since they help move the story.

STRICTHOHCPLESTRICTHOHCPLE10 months ago

Love it. Sexual terrific!

P7y1r4oP7y1r4o9 months ago

Encore, Encore.. plz tell me theres more to this story.. Since I know conferences are Bi-Anual at most or annual

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Well, would have liked to have another chapter or two of the rest of the stay. Could she pass up any experiences with any of the other folks at the hotel?

Buster2UBuster2U6 months ago

5 Big Blazing Stars to writer and illustrator. Fun Read, no harm no fowl. Thanks, Buster2U

SatyrDickSatyrDick6 months ago

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Fun und Hawt!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Chapter two. When Grace and Robert go back to their home, Robert fucks Grace while she is in the shower. Grace enjoys it so much that she and Robert sleep together every night and fuck every chance they have together. Robert impregnates Grace with his huge cock shooting hot jets of thick cum deep inside Grace's pussy filled with billions of his sperm. Robert continues to fuck and impregnate Grace and they have four babies. All of them have blonde hair and blue eyes just like Grace and Robert.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Chapter 2 - By the time Grace returned from her conference, her son Robert was horny again. When Grace undressed for the night, her son Robert quickly stripped off his clothes too. Robert picked his mother Grace up and and began kissing her forcefully. He threw Grace on the bed and quickly mounted her. Robert forced his mother Grace to spread her legs wide and began screwing his huge hard cock inside of her pussy. Grace screamed but once Robert got all of his cock deep inside of her, he began fucking her as hard as he could. Grace was overwhelmed by her son Robert's animalistic behavior. Grace's pussy began juicing growing lust, coating her son Robert's cock as she orgasmed and wrapped her legs around Robert's ass. For several minutes they fucked like two lovers. Grace began to orgasm again as her body was ovulating. Robert reached his orgasm, and pumped forty hot, thick jetstreams of sperm-filled cum deep inside of his mother Grace's pussy. One of the millions of Robert's sperm soon found it's way to one of his mother's eggs which accepted it, impregnating Grace. Robert and Grace fucked three more times during the night. Nine months later, Grace gave birth to twins, a baby daughter who looked just like her and a baby son who looked just like Robert.

AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

Robbie plans carefully and comes up with a plan. When Grace and Robert get home, Robbie spends the night in his bed sleeping well for twelve hours while his body reloaded with sperm. The next morning when Grace is taking a shower, her son Robert, now with a full erection, quietly entered her bathroom and stripped off his shorts. Robert then opened Grace's shower and stepped in. Grace was startled and screamed. Robert took his mother Grace in his arms and began kissing her forcefully. Grace finally opened her mouth again and her son Robbie slipped his tongue in. Grace began kissing Robbie back as her tongue wrestled with his and her breasts hardened as she felt Robert back her to the shower wall. Robert suddenly picked his mother Grace up and held her against the shower wall as he began slipping his tongue in Grace's pussy. Robbie began kissing, licking, and sucking his mother Grace's vaginal juices as he held her firmly in place. Grace put her hands on the back of Robert's head and pulled him forward as she began having an orgasm. Robbie then lowered Grace to his huge cock and began rubbing it across her labia. Grace took her hands and opened her vaginal lips and Robbie began slowly screwing his ten-inch cock inside his gorgeous mother's pussy. Robbie began gradually began pumping his cock back and forth as Grace began another orgasm and clutching Robert around his back pulling him tighter inside her. Grace began calling out his name and saying "Oh Robbie, oh Robbie baby." Robert began fucking his mother Grace as hard as he could and she began shouting "Oh yes baby, fuck me, fuck me, fuck me! Both Grace and Robert reached their climatic orgasms at the same time just as Grace shouted "Oh baby, yes, FUCK ME! Robbie began pumping cum and sperm deep inside of his mother Grace's pussy in forty furious jet streams as Grace and Robert held onto each other tightly. Grace yelled out "OH BABY! YES, YES, YES! Grace's body was ovulating and one of Robert's millions of sperm rushed inside her womb and connected with one of his mother's eggs, penetrating it, fertilizing it, and impregnating Grace. Robert and Grace spent the rest of that day and night fucking in Grace's bed which, from that moment, became their bed. Nine months later, Grace gave birth to twin babies, one baby son and one baby daughter. Over the next ten years, Grace and Robert fucked in every room in their house, in every position, and every chance they had. Robert fucked and impregnated his mother Grace six more times. Grace gave birth to three more baby daughters and three more baby sons.

Fireplace10Fireplace106 days ago

The anonymous comment says it all . A 5 star story. Thanks!

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