All Comments on 'Got S.M.I.L.F.? Ch. 02'

Enjoyed both chapters very much, keep me excited the entire time. Just the right mix of sex and story.

Excellent story. Just believable enough and oh so hot!

Loved both chapters. Any chance of a Third??????

Loved both chapters. Any chance of a Third??????

hey there alpaca: you are still writing, saw your most recent posted story. this story can keep on going! it has the potential for more than just three - adding a trip to the college campus for trixie and candy with dennis and brandy, hard on just thinking about what could happen there!

This was an awesome set of story you are a very talented writer thank you for the please it brought me

Got S.M.I.L.F? 1 & 2 are the only submissions I have read, penned by Evil Alpaca...so far. I found them amazing, from the other end of the gender spectrum. Of course my sexual exploits arent as extensive as Trixies.

I have recently undergone a liberation of my own, with similar circumstances. There were parst of part 2 that made me a bit misty...I know...I'm a wuss...LOL...KUDOS to Evil Alpaca

Loved these story chapters, id go crazy if u didnt make a third! =(

terrific story!

how I missed your stories before today. Thanks Evil Alpaca!!!!!!!

A wonderful read......and HOT.

ILienBagby

I WANT A PART 3!!!! The first two were so good, that to not have a part 3 is almost criminal.

Please?

LOVED IT!!!!

Well thought out and fun to read!

of saying "no part 3 is planned." It is a pet peave of mine (polite talk for really pissing me off :) when a writer puts "to be continued" after every one of his/her stories and never continues them :( grrrrrrrrrrrr

Great story, very sexy, well writen, quite plausible, kept me horney, and I enjoyed it all :)

Lynn

5 stars as usual

My Errata List

Neither of them can figure out => can should be could

your thirty-seven!" => you are

Trixie stopped grinding against Trixie's face

"We've missed you to," said Brandy sleepily => too instead of to

"We might now have to," => not,instead of now

asking to power her sister's car => borrow instead of power

breezy, medium length shirt. => skirt not shirt

so he could by cigar => buy not by

power-blue bra , Trixie had shown a preference for power-blue as a color, => Should this be powder blue ? Powder blue is a well known shade of blue.

lovers up her at the other college.

hip-huggers, barely rising Trixie's crotch.

their young friends would be able to get it.

Their heads were so closed together

. Brandy's eyes lit ups a