All Comments on 'Garden Centre'

Hot read, hope the other part will be soon. Also like the wife love the nipple attention...

And is there any logical reason for using it?

now cAN YOU GUESS THE LANGUAGE? oops cAPSLOCK. goddamn.

Because he is from India? (The arranged marriage element was a major clue to this.)

You will notice the fact that English and the local language are used in the conversations. This is what happens in India.

This is a 4* star read and I await part 2 with interest. Cuckold stories aren't my cup of tea, but this is well-told.

Shows the language as Swahili. So much for the India idea. I usually stay away from authors like this because of the language issues but I must admit it's not bad. 3*

and it is evident from the British words (centre, cheeky smile). It really doesn't add anything to have them speaking in a foreign language and translate for the reader. This same interaction goes on around the world between a married woman and her suitor. Just leave the foreign language out, no matter what Google translate says it is, and concentrate on the emotions, the feelings, the smells, the sighs and moans of the forbidden mating. Still gave it 5 *'s, because at least you can write clear sentences.

nuff said!