All Comments on 'Fresh Tarts, Apple'

Loved it! Five great big stars. Thanks for sharing your work with us.

A pleasant little story and I quite enjoyed it. My sole criticism is that it finished a little abruptly (not too bad but I thought you could have squeezed a little more out of it). Anyway, regardless of that quibble, it's five stars from me.

Very good. Just right length of short story. Well done.

You definitely leave your readers wanting MORE..........................

I thoroughly enjoyed this. You write so well, but often it seems the sadness of the world overwhelms the story.

Excellent story , moved along nicely and definitely wanting more of these two beautiful women 🍀

Another winner. Short and sweet.

Thank you. I would love to have a swell day.

I appreciate your work as a creative person. You are good at inventing interesting characters, whether they are bad, good or in-between (which is where almost everyone is, actually). The two ladies this short story revolves about are both interesting and both of the In-Between variety of person, the kind that I like to read about and hope for a continuation of some sort. I like Happy Endings.

I honestly couldn’t take this story seriously… it doesn’t feel like it’s written by someone who’s experienced lesbian sex, especially the number of times breast size was used as a descriptor. It just disrupts the flow. And the characters just felt like caricatures of the “dominant, experienced” lover and the “submissive, inexperienced” lover, with very little depth to them

A short economic story getting ovef the gist of the situation in a short space. Liked it but it could have been longer and have more of an ending.

It's really cool that you have the same characters pop up in all your different stories. It adds a bit of dimension to them and also entices the reader to read more of your works!

Loved the story, very passionate and it seems like they are a perfect match