All Comments on 'Fooled Again'

5 Star

Part 2 with them both pregnant would be great

I would be looking forward to next year of I was him.

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https://xarthwritesthings.wordpress.com/2020/03/28/fooled-again/

Usual warning that spaces sometimes creep into the link for reasons I can't determine or fix.

I had fun with this one. Where it's fairly different from usual, I am curious what people think. I know it's not gonna hit the same buttons as a longer, deeper story.

Anyway, thanks for reading and feedback and stuff

-X

Xarth is by far the best writer of brother-sister incest stories. His stories are never sleazy. However, neither he nor any other writer will ever improve on Dreams Don't Count, which is the best ever.

I’m always excited when you write another story. This one did not disappoint. Thank you! Very fun and I can’t wait to see if you write a sequel.

Thanks!

I agree, the joke would lovingly be on both the girls when first April, then Charlotte turns up pregnant. You already set it up when you talked about the girls not planning on it going that far and him cumming in his sister, and her momentary concern as he came in her, before accepting it. Then there was no way that the wife wasn’t going to get her pussy filled after sister did. Finally, the wife eating out sister’s cum filled pussy sets the scene for continued threesomes.

So let’s see the girls get pregnant, sister move in, and much brother-wife-sister sex to follow. And many more pregnancies...

Love your work! Would love to see some longer stuff too!

Cute story. Try to avoid double negatives, as they break the spell of the prose. I also would have liked more background to explain 1) why the sister wanted to fuck him and B) why the wife went along with it.

This one was a change of pace from your usual. Still a 5 star story, but it somehow lacks the impact that even your other shorter stories like Kaylee had. Keep up the good work!

I would like to give five stars, but this new format won’t register my vote. I’m not sure if it will take my comment.

This was much better than the stories in the actual contest.

All “Xarth” stories are a gift. Kudos.

Once again you ticked off all my favourite boxes. It was a fun read. I hope you continue to write and have fun doing it.

fun quick read. good job.

Five stars

April calling to talk to Charlotte next April Fool's Day: "I'm pregnant!"

Charlotte: "Oh my God! Congratulations! Who's the father?"

April: "Your husband."

April, later at hospital while her brother is rushed into surgery for a busted skull and Charlotte is being taken away by the police: "April Fools?"

If my little sister ever gave me a morning like that I'd have suggested we make everyday April first. What an accommodating wife! A very exciting story, Xarth - but that's nothing new for you, is it? Thank you!

Loved it, room for more,, keep it up

April should get pregnant by her brother and Charlotte gets pregnant at the same time. Hot stuff.

Not realistic but still a fun story.

He, his sister and his wife -- all had their bones tickled inter-alia including the funny ones!

wife set up a cheating session??? I'll bet she is cheating on her husband. He should set up a trap.

a whore story? 1 star

Great story. This could actually happen as long as they don't kiss.

Thanks for sharing your stories with us. I've read most of your library of work that interested me and loved all but one.

I'm going to add you as a favorite author; something I don't do often 😉.

Perfect

So he got raped? I love rape.

Genius :)

I don't know... I was kind of hoping April was going to eat out her sister-in-law while her brother held her in place. There was nothing realistic about this story, but it was a fun romp.

weaker than my pullout game

Well that would have been the end of the marriage and any relationship he had with his sister would be over. Divorce the wife and move away not telling anyone where you went.

Loved the unlikely premise even if a it predicted. Hot none the less

There could have been much more done with this story, as goes for many of your stories. It always feels a bit like you're bored with it by the end...

This was fun as it was intended, but in the real world, it could be disastrous. But I guess that’s what makes fantasy fun.

Love to read more about them…. Especially if April’s unexpected creampie resulted in her getting pregnant by her brother. And his wife demanding that he impregnate her too, nit to be outdone by April. And the three of them sharing their love and bed going forward…. And maybe turning April Fool’s pranks into April 1st impregnations going forward for the next few years.

So hot! And silly, and sexy, and goofy, and fun! 5*