by BreakTheBar
Jerry needs to learn some fighting skills ASAP. Also can we please have a character list?
I love this story, but I second the request for a character list. The cast is starting to get large enough that I'm forgetting who's who between chapters.
Love this story, can't get enough of it QUICK enough! I now life comes first and writing isn't easy so I get it. Still doesn't me I wish the chapters were more closely spaced together.
As others have said, a character list would be good. There are so many names I can’t remember who’s who between updates. Otherwise, this whole series is incredible!
I’m sadly finding that I’m not as into constant orgy stuff with the established cast, but I am very interested in seeing how things resolve and settle with Esmerelda.
Another exceptional part. Storyline moving right along. Thanks for
your commitment to your fans. 5 stars as always.
Harem stuff isn't usually my thing, but I like the way you are building the story around it. And the girls are NOT just some brain-dead cock hungry sluts, with each new one having bigger tits and an increasing need to be covered in his seed. I applaud you.
I was curious about one thing that I am assuming is part of the plot, but Jeremiah seems to be filled with magic, but then when interacting with Ndia, he says he feels as though he is a cup of water vs a lake. Is there some level of increasing how much magic he can consistently retain? Whether by artifacts, use, etc? Might be something that he can talk with Adama about.
Now that the power siphoning ritual worked for the party, Jeremiah needs to set up swinger’s clubs and brothels with the spell in the basement. He could be constantly pulling in energy from all over his territory. Another great chapter. Keep ‘em coming.
Loved it so far, but when can we expect more chapters? I hope it isn't that long...and maybe one of the Magic girls get knocked up...
I don't understand the explanation on ndia's power reserves, does it mean she has infinite amount of magic?
@MDX47 ndia's power seems to work like money at a bank or large company. there are (hopefully) plenty of reserves but power(money) is constantly flowing in(deposits/orgies with sigils) and out (loans/expenditures). One might presume that as long as those flows/payments/sex parties continue she would have access to near unlimited power.
However, it appears that for now the scale of her power even without those flows is on a scale beyond anything else we've/he's seen so far.
A fantastic series, please continue. I'm as invested in the adventure as I am in the sex.
I haven't been this enthralled with a series ever! It's like a porn version of The Magician's on Netflix. I love it!
This was/is a great series as a whole, and the individual stories a fantastic within themselves. I look forward to the series continuing. I must say the boy’s got stamina. Cheers and thank you!
“… the gooey concoction…”
Nope. Something to be a concoction it must have been concocted – i.e. mixed up or put together as from a recipe of raw materials of different kinds.
It is not a dick covered in natural secretions.
– F W.IW
@anonymous - “Concoction: a mixture of various ingredients or elements”
I think the “various ingredients” bar was met.