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by klrxo

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jhentaijhentaiover 3 years ago

nice story! good to see you back!

klrxoklrxoover 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for all your comments and support.

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Happy reading! K

MaximusTheMadMaximusTheMadover 3 years ago

Welcome back. That was a fun one. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Excellent. This story is everything I love

bmike2bmike2over 3 years ago
Welcome to hell back!

Always glad to see you return. You have left us hanging on several story fronts. If you’re so inclined please continue. Another great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A silly funny story

A fun 5 star read LOL!!!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 3 years ago

Hot story with a neat twist. Personally I would have gotten a nanny cam and hidden it in the bedroom rather than depend on the son. Five stars and a favorite point!

shadowofallshadowofallover 3 years ago
Excellent and amazing!

Welcome Back, great story, very much loved it. Hope your staying around awhile, maybe finish off a few of those cliffhangers you’ve left us with.

WriterGuy27WriterGuy27over 3 years ago
“You bow to no one”

(^Quoting Aragorn). Pretty much everyone reading you stories lol

Danz138Danz138over 3 years ago
Welcome Back

Glad to see you back. I always love your stories. I hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Lol

sounds like me and my older sister... Fucking her husband, but she made him believe I I wasn't doing what he claimed.. I'm still fucking her to this day..

TralababalanTralababalanover 3 years ago

Welcome back...another great story....i'm gonna check the link and subscribe!

49WIZARD8849WIZARD88over 3 years ago
The Undisputed Master

Klrxo comes second to absolutely no one when it comes to the M/S genre. Guys, if you think this is good, you gotta go to Klrxo's subscribestar page and read, "Learning all about sex....from mom"!! One of her hottest stories stories that she's put out

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 3 years ago
Welcome back!

So good to see you back once more, with another classic tale of mom and son incestuous fucking. You haven't lost your touch, this is as good as all the other stories you've written in the past, and easily wins a 5 Star award from me. I would love to read more from you.

hair94hair94over 3 years ago

Glad you are back!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
As always Big 5 star

Welcome back.

You know how to capture our imagination, very original and hot.

I do hope for chapter 2.

ManoBlueManoBlueover 3 years ago

Happy that you're back but I didn't like this one bit. Why bring attention to it if your just gonna lie.

SGTFuzzy486SGTFuzzy486over 3 years ago
Glad you’re back

Soo glad you’re writing again

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Why did Jen and Brian do that to Tom? Was it in case something in the future looks suspicious, Tom would believe whatever Jen told him?

dirtysondirtysonover 3 years ago

you’re writing again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Welcome back king!

Hope to see more stories from you in the future of naughty mommies, lucky sons & clueless husbands!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You are one of the best writer's in literotics

After so long , a great story

rodavrodavover 3 years ago
Very sinful

Very sinful Mother and son. But so thrillingly exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Disgusting,

I always liked your stories but this one is disgusting and the woman should be ashamed for telling lies and humiliating her husband who has not even wronged her in any ways.shame on you for writing such a story.

ekim22ekim22over 3 years ago
No wanking, I was reading this for the story LOL

LMFAO I went from looking for some spank material to before I knew it I couldn't care less about the porn aspect, I wanted to see how the story unfolded!

Awesome!

mustang123mustang123over 3 years ago

Hi You are such a naughty person writing this story ( lol ) I loved it simply because you had me on the ropes for so long and then the reversed ending WOW I appreciated that . You have a sex filled mind and it shows in your writing

I am so glad that you are like that. I looked at your profile and I think I am in lust with the writer too lol Keep going . It what makes life worth living

Bill

apophasisapophasisover 3 years ago

klrxo, if you want to write stories with underaged characters, find a site that doesn't have a problem with that. They exist. I don't know whether it was you or the mods who removed the story when it was posted a few years ago in its first iteration, but I expect the same to happen again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot story

Very nice and erotic thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Enjoyed

I always enjoy your contributions.

blackfenblackfenover 3 years ago
Welcome Back

Great to have to you back writing. Hope for more soon.

intoeverything2intoeverything2over 3 years ago
Glad your back!

Love your stories. I'm so glad your back!

danyodz26danyodz26over 3 years ago
Not long enough

Can you please make your stories longer and more sneaky

rightbankrightbankover 3 years ago
I was getting dizzy

from all the twists and turns

a fun read

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

i really enjoy younger boy and older mom stories and these ones are really good, please write more!

i also enjoy a friend of the son ones

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Part 2

This needs to have a part two where the dad still questioning their relationship when he finds the mothers panties in his son room after the son borrowed a usb or something he needed for a new work project.

StormseekerStormseekerover 3 years ago

Welcome back klrxo!

After all this time is really great to read a new story from you.

Any chance that you could consider a sequel for Hurricane Mom or Valentine Mom?

StormseekerStormseekerover 3 years ago

Welcome back!

it's so great to read a new story from you after all this time, thank you so much!

Love yourIs there any chance of a sequel for Cumming to Terms, Hurricane Mom or Valentine Mom?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Glad to see you again

You are a superior writer. I use your works as the standard by which I judge other submissions. Well constructed, grammatically correct with excellent spelling and punctuation. Your stories are a delight to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Brilliant!

The build up was great and the depth of lying and betrayal were awesome. More of that please, possibly a continuation with the girl down the street and neighbour helping with the betrayal? The only thing I couldn't fathom was whether the setup was planned by both from the beginning (which would make the story even more delightfully dark), or if the boy just gave into the mothers demands/persuasions? Telling the story from the mothers perspective in the same timeline may be quite entertaining as well, really show just how wicked she is? Keep it up!

OralDaveOralDaveover 3 years ago

Clever, with a plot and a twist. Very sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Missed ya.

Wow. I have missed reading your stories. Can’t wait for the next one. You are my favorite writer! Love your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow..

DO YOU PLAN ON GIVING US TOOM 209- CHAPTER 5?? YOU LEFT US HANGING ON DAY 4 WOTH NO PUSSY FUCKING FROM THE BOYS AT SCHOOL.. CMON NOW PLEASE FINISH THAT STORY..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fuck this was a genius piece of work. I honestly was curious as hell you were going to pull this off and that salacious ending didn't disappoint. Please, please, please, please, please×infinity make a sequel to this: show us what happens that Summer Brian is "punished". I hope it had a lot of animalistic raw mating, smugly lying to Dad's face what actually happened, a week where Dad goes on a business trip leaving mom and son alone, son and mom agreeing to keep making babies non-stop to see how many it'll take until Dad finally figures it our.

Out of your works, this is the one I want to see a sequel the most from.

HooHaa77HooHaa77over 2 years ago

The Mom is a cheating, lying slut and the son is apparently retarded.

That marriage is headed for divorce because the son will eventually blab to Dad again about fucking the Mom.

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 2 years ago

(1/10/2022) I thought the beginning was quite funny. No hubby could be that dumb and no teen could be that sadistic,...right? Um...could they? I felt sorry for the unwitting cuck. I would have enjoyed this immensely if the hubby had been a mean un-appreciative cheating sob. not some pathetic little tool. Well, this is what you get when you're asleep at the wheel. KEEP YOUR EYE ON THE ROAD, YOUR TUNG ON HER CLIT, AND YOUR DICK IN HER MOUTH!! Happy wife happy life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Makes one wonder, your stories about humiliating the father and husband...

VitriolhackVitriolhackalmost 2 years ago

I thought it was funny! Cucking the dad with an incest story is an interesting twist. Could the father’s jealousy actually hide a newfound hormones for his wife? The story doesn’t say! 😝

Wark2002Wark2002almost 2 years ago

If James Thurber wrote erotica, this would have been one of his stories. Shades of “Unicorn in the Garden.”

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

When a son has absolutely zero respect for his father, and his mother agrees with him. Why she's still married at all? No doubt she likes the money and the roof over her head, and doesn't care about betraying him 24x7 going forward.

tinfoilhattinfoilhatalmost 2 years ago

I hate these 2 page stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it !! uniqe denial story

mattenwmattenwabout 1 year ago

I don't know in which state you live, but with us the "mother" would go to jail for incest for at least 5 years! If you write stories of this kind, then you should go under SiFi or make it clear that you disregard rules!

MHunter5MHunter55 months ago

Great story, but I had a few questions about it. Like why, why did the son say anything? Was it a mistake or was it a game they were playing on dad the whole it? I can see it going either way and it won't take anything away from the overall story.

walkindatdogwalkindatdogabout 2 months ago

Truly twisted! Why would the son willingly blab about his affair with his mom to his dad?! I know that without that, you wouldn't have this story, but it rings so very false! one of the above commenters said the son must be retarded. Yes, and mom is just sadistic., And, yes, why is she still in a marriage where she delights in tormenting her husband? This whole story is a house of cards, maybe Jenga, where it all comes tumbling down at the slightest mistake. I very much like other stories of yours, just maybe stick to the plausible, not the improbably absurd! And, yes, as others say, your command of written English is exemplary!

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