All Comments on 'Flying Blind Ch. 03'

Thank you for posting a new story. It's amazing so far. Can't wait to see what's next.

I admit it, sometimes I actually skip the sex-scenes because the story and the characters are so awesome. Shame on me.

more? for me? please?

I think i'm just gunna stick with wow. xD

Its good to read comments on the stories, but i rarely comment myself, but these are old enough and more importantly good enough, to want my stamp on them. xD

Well EA (NOT Electronic Arts!) it is obvious that you write perfectly. I am absolutely blown away by the quality and QUANTITY of the three chapters I have so far read. I think it is all first rate so you must be sensational (tee hee).

Seriously am am pleased with the length of the chapters as well as the quality of the story and the writing. My reason for reading is enjoyment and escape from the life I currently have. My daily routine is a nasty necessity but I get irregular breaks an I so need them. You are my current breakmeister supreme. Thank you so much, bud!

Your writing itself and creation of the story deserve 5 stars. However, Kevin's unnecessary use of drugs and the lack of initiative of stopping Madison from corrupting herself with Kevin's "creations" bring it down to 3 stars. I completely disapprove of the drug use. Stupid and unnecessary. Otherwise, good job.

Is a douche. It's fucking college. I guess you'd rank Hunter S. Thompson a zero huh?

5 stars again and a cliffhanger :)

My errata as usual

Joanna had gone with blacks and grays, wh => Should this be joanna or Madison ?

letting them slid under her skin => not slid, slide

And Heda seemed please, pushing => not please, pleased

without getting starting a fight." => getting is superfluous

Im so taken by your talent to write such intense fabulous telltale .".... Thank you for sharing

Another powerful chapter by a highly creative writer