by Xarth
Nice read. Would kinda like an exploration of the universe you've tossed them into if that's possible.
I'd love to read more about these characters. Think they and the world they're in are really interesting. Want to see more of their time together abd what they each can do.
All I can say is wow! The story is excellent. The narrative is superb, both on its own or as the start of something more ( hint, hint :P ). The prose flows beautifully, the erotica is steamy. I loved how sweet it all was, the couple are adoreable, and it put a goofy smile on my face more than a couple of times.
I'd love to read more of these two characters and their relationship, great work :D
5/5 stars
Usually reading girl on girl stories isn't my cup of tea, oh I like watching well enough, hehehe, but prefer stories with one guy (brother, father) thrown in ;) ...but when I saw a kitty thrown into the mix then saw the catagory, well I had to give it a read! Wow! I was NOT dissapointed!! The girls were yummy, and to be honest, Tabitha is my perfect body type;)
....and her kitty, my perfect pussy type, hehehe! I just wish it was a bit longer. (...but I suppose that's a common wish from most readers about most stories, we don't want them to end quite often!)
Thanks for the amazing story!! ...I've already fantasized some extra material for myself;
Whew!! Now I'm really wishing, as a guy, that I had noticed Tabitha, paid attention to her and swept her off her feet! :). Would probably have to lick her through multiple orgasms before even attempting to push deep inside her deliciously screaming tight kitty for the first time. Ooh! Or being Rose, with a little secret localized transforming of my own, starting out with a cock finger size, slipping inside of her, shocking her, hehe! Then slowly transforming it till it kept growing in length till it just tickled her back wall, and just slowly grinding on her while getting lost kissing her while again slowly growing, this time thicker and thicker, stretching her till her eyes got big and round in shock and surprise as her tummy distinded, her cock outlined up to Tabitha's navel! Thick, long and oh so hard, working it in her so well that she turned into a shivering, shaking drooling puddle of ecstasy! ;)
Yes! This story is amazing. Loved it even more than your other girl/girl stories.
Haven't read a lot of your creations. I'm mostly into lesbian stories. That's probably why I gave this a go. Glad I did. This story rocked.
DEFINITELY A WINNER!!! 5🌟's
Really enjoyed the unique path this story followed. If you read enough of the stories here you start to feel like you are re-reading the same or similar stories just with different characters. This was a completely new and fresh take and for that I thank you. Please keep sharing your tales with us. As with most of your offerings I would love to see a continuation of this story line.
Best wishes to you in all your endeavours.ii
Is there going to be any more? I was disappointed to see it hasn't grown since I first read it
Yet another fantastic story that simply begs for a follow on chapter
I love this story. It was definitely worth the re-read.
Contrary to some readers' opinion, I don't feel a sequel is needed. This ended on a nice HEA note. As they say, "Sequels rarely equal."
Xarth, you'vedone it again. Another sexy, cute and heartwarming (and again sexy) story.
I really enjoyed this. However, I also felt like it was the first two chapters of a much longer story.
I suppose that's also praise as well. Because I'd love to read all about the world they live in amd how Tab deals with probably not being the love of Rosie's life.
I was wondering what the original Felicia was so jelly about- unless She was also transformed- or even reall a Tom. Just sayin'
Regards... Anon56