All Comments on 'Flash 03: Loose Ends'

For the first time ever since I started reading ST1956's stories, first time I didn't read to finish. I stopped reading when at the (page3?) it became it was all Ginger now. I am an BTB nut and I do like happy endings and reconciliation but...I darn don't care about Ginger.

I could not get the image out in Chapter 1 where Ginger visited Cameron in the hospital and all she wanted was to get out of there so she can have sex with Chad in her and Cam's marital bed. A tumor isn't the reason why she had that thought -- she liked Chad's big phallus even though her husband needed her in the hospital. That for me was unforgivable -- having tumor or not. Cam is just one good cuck after all

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But hey I am just one of ST1956 fan and like the author says, it's his universe.

A first ever too to give author a 3†.

I hate cuck stories.

Great story!

5

As always................. damn near perfect!!!!!

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5++++++/5!!!

It had all the required elements of a SaddleTramp saga

Great story

"The universe exploded." I loved it! Definitely something different from the Tramp, but very enjoyable. Look forward to seeing what happens next. And no, he is NOT a cuck, just someone who got the whole story before burning his wife.

Well done, sometimes the good guy gets it all.

Very original and intriguing story line

She agreed to fuck Chad before he drugged her... the decision to betray her husband was made before she went back to the office where the boss slipped something into her drink.

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What makes this even more egregious is that the husband witnessed the full extent of her betrayal from reading their memories. He knows she fucked dozens of guys as the company whore and still took her back? How would he ever forget Ginger being used like a cum-dumpster in gangbang after gangbang and loving every second of it?

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Just no. Only a cum-slurping cuckold would even consider forgiving a wife after all that debauchery. That she had "a brain tumour" influencing her behaviour doesn't even come into it. That's not even mentioning the ice-cold way Ginger abandoned him in the hospital for more of Chad's big cock. To end this story with a reconciliation is even more far fetched than aliens giving the husband super powers!

A typical RAACuck pattern, the wife has a tumor, she is being blackmailed so the fact that she was a whore fucking hundreds of men doesn't matter. The author has exceeded the limits of the absurd, even for 100% fiction and fantasy. The whore's Martian ray was missing.

0*

Bloody good.

A cameo by JoP would make an interesting story I think, if the universe's could stand it.

I really enjoyed the Max Burnage series, as well as these Flash tales. Combining the 2 should prove interesting! I look forward to continuing the adventure as well as discovering what adventures are in store for the Mother to be. There are so many directions this could develop, especially in a Saddletramp world.

Keep up the excellent writing. 5 stars are not enough.

Munchie184

Great ending and its nice to see that you actually have a heart ;) There was no bitch to burn here and I think what happend to Ginger before the accident was torture enough. How anyone could even think that Cam is a cuck I will never understand. The most someone could accuse Ginger for is her not trusting Cam but even then, her decision to not tell him saved his life most likeley. If she ever confessed or refused the board before the lightning struck, he would be dead and there would be no story to tell.

Entertaining. Liked the sci-fi angle. But you should leave the legal stuff alone. D

Very good story.

Was shocked at bland response to getting hundreds of millions in the settlement. Especially the lawyer. A few days of work and she is suddenly rich beyond the dreams of avarice.

Part time work for wife when hubby has $800 million?????

Mitochondrial DNA tracing shows we are all related to a single woman, tens of thousands of years ago. So, I'm guessing this is similar for our future as a species as the massive advantages this pair and future offspring will have over most everyone else.

Could see this story developed into a series of novels.

Is monogamy needed or even desirable in a super race if DNA transfer through sex can more speedily transform the original species if like minded candidates are found. He should be able to transform three or more women per day. In two generations it would be a completely new world.

Gave story five stars.

hope to see more of this one too

After what she was doing why was she so concerned if he had sex with others? And if he wanted to keep the slut just use his powers to erase her mind and put in what he wants like she loves only him, sex with him is the best, etc. as for all the others just blow them up.

I usually message the man directly, but I think this could be another Saddletramp super series. 5 big stars

Another great story. Thank you. I love your writing. The story line, characters, and the dialogue are perfect. And the execution is so close to perfect I only bring it up to ask you, the weaver of Persian rugs, purposely plant them. I look forward as always to your next story. *****/*****

Really love this story and can not wait to see where this saga takes us. Thanks for creating this interesting and emotional vision.

Great story so far I don't think you have written anything I don't like .

More! More!

And you brought this into the Max Burnage line?!

I demand more!!!

5-stars!

-JMFC

Very, Very good, ST! Should be a great series!

Always glad to see another one of your stories! I look forward to the next chapters!

I cannot wait to see what Max gets Drake into. I love it when the stories cross over and form new branches.

Keep it up, Saddle tramp! 5 stars!!!

Great but with $800m in the bank- enough for a hundred lifetimes - why talk about enough to tide us over etc? Apart from that it's another winner.

Wow! I like 5 Stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Loved this Series! And to connect it to the Max Burnage series was a stroke of Genius! Love reading your work Tramp!

i was not expecting you to use max burnage in this part but it turned out great 5 stars as always keep up the good work as always

How is it she didn’t get pregnant from almost every man in the company banging her, yet the hero manages it right out the gate?

Great chapter! And unlike Mac_Lapu I do like happy endings. Not that we are at that point yet!

Cheers

SAGE

if everyone is pleading guilty they dont empanel a jury and hold a trial

Yes different yes completely mad, in a good way, but a lot of fun. Was the wife let off too easily? Probably...but hell it was a good read thanks for the story.

I agree with the other commentators that this is a 5* story, again! I know that life keeps us busy, but please don't leave us in suspense any longer than you have to! :)

Very enjoyable series look forward to more Cameron and ginger

Nice wrap-up and even have a couple wrinkles thrown in to keep it interesting.

That was a fun read. Two issues, though - first, the nit. He has a metric shit-ton of money, and you bring up health insurance and a monthly dividend. He could pay any conceivable medical bill out of petty cash, and take out a half million dollars *per month* while his net worth continued to increase, forever. Not a big point, though.

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More importantly, with his abilities you're painting yourself into a corner. Even at his current level, he's simply too powerful, and any future conflicts will be trivial. That's not even considering his continuing growth, nor the powers that his wife is also developing. And, eventually, his kid(s)?? It's like what happened in the TV series "Heroes" - they gave one of the characters the ability to manipulate time and space, which trumps any and every other ability. They had to get more and more unrealistic (ok, it was pretty unrealistic to begin with, but still) in order to try and generate any kind of interesting conflict. You may have already gone too far down that path for a Chapter 4.

Once again excellent work. Really enjoyed it

Love this one

I can't wait for the next installment. Sensational story, well-written, and fast paced. Again, thanks for the story, and if you keep writing, I keep reading!

If a defendant pleads guilty, he/she waives the right to a trial and the case proceeds to the sentencing phase. It is not a unilateral decision on the part of the judge. In essence, that would be a bench trial where the judge make a “unilateral” decision. Pleading guilty is not a decision of the judge, but the defendant(s).

Thank you saddle tramp. I was very happy to see Flash 3 pop up. You did a beautiful job with this series. 5 Stars for you. Would give more if it was possible. Thanks again.

ST - WOW! I had made the comment after Flash 01 this had the makings of another great ST series, and sir you did not disappoint. Love the endless possibilities with Cam introduced to Max. Again thank you for effort & time. 5*

Caveman

Awesome story. Loved it.

It would be interesting if you could do a follow-up series involving max, his wife and capmeron and his wife.

Knew he was coming into the fold. I can't wait to see how far Ginger's powers progress. not to mention our future baby superhero! LOL! As always a fun read - 5*

Freaking awesome!!!!! Love the tie in! Looking forward to more of your wonderful tales!

I love the story and anxiously await the coming chapters. Another solid five star effort! Good luck on the home remodeling my past experiences tell me that it will be very stressful, expensive, and in the end worth it.

Bravo,! And just to say - I did not expect anything else from you - does not do justice to your very good work. I am really fascinated by how you find the topics of your stories and how your stories branch out with one another. A really great gift that you have there. Thank you for your very good work!

Loved it! Great mix in the storyline and love the character development, looking forward to the next installment.

Nicely done, looking forward to reading more about them as a couple, as they both evolve now. Also, what's in store for their baby.

Meanwhile more on the partnership with Max and his lovely bride!!!!

Great storyline and as usual the writing was too notch.

Very well done. Can't wait for more.

Another truly magnificent story

Thanks ST another very enjoyable story. Can't wait for more.

I've enjoyed all three episodes so far, and am looking forward to the "evolution" of the series. Thanks!

Interest on $800 million dollars at 2% is something like $16 million dollars. These guys would have to be money managers like Donald Trump to fuck up that kind of steady income. Why does ST seem to make such an issue of their finances? Yeah, he loves her bit that doesn't erase the visual images and her admission that she liked what the board members did to her. Take all the money and the divorce she offered. Give her enough to live comfortably for the rest of her life then put all that ugliness behind himself. With that kind of money and a lifetime of free time I am sure he could find love again that wouldn't be clouded by the memories.

Great series. Looking forward to more of "Flash:". Good to see you're back!

Glad I'm still alive to read your tales. I loved it. 10 stars, the Bear approves. I love good science fiction; just be aware that you will have to really work to find suitable bad guys to mess with. Push comes to shove, the hero can always blow them to smithereens. loved it; more, more, more.

The Bear

Love your creative stories.

echoing what I have said before, "I love the way you write!"

As usual, well done. It is always a pleasure to read your stuff. Please keep writing. Thank you. 👏👍

Another excellent installment by one the best Author on this site. 25 BIG FAT FUCKING STARS!

Love the Saddletramp universe! Can't wait for.the inevitable massive crossover with Justice, his grandson, Max, Adrestria, Cam, and Ginger!

Amazing! So well written. Didn't think anyone could make a RAAC out of this story, your mastery amazes me! Thanks so much for this! Really looking forward to new episodes, especially with the integration of Max Burnage.

Thank you for posting in just one genre, I usually abandon stories that bounce all over - just not enough time or energy to waste. Trying to ignore the dross here means I miss some gems.

But you used piqued ! I am impressed.

I'm torn on this... Prior to her accident I def wanted her to suffer but I understand that she really had no other choice. What happened to the hubby was really the only way the story could've gone otherwise he'd be dead and w/ no powers. The 1st few pages in this chapter was good but went downhill after that for me. Still a well written story even if unrealistic but the author did state that in the beginning.

Digging it.

Love the Max tie-in and really really look forward to any and all collabs they do.

First, thank you for not injecting your politics into this story. That made it much more pleasant for me to read. Second, you are a good writer and extremely creative. I love your plots and your character development. Thank you for sharing your talents with us, and for not forcing your politics into this story.

Nice job. I like it.

Congratulations on a story well received. I thought it was inane, juvenile, and ridiculous, but that's just me. Fuck me. Keep up the good work, even if its really mediocre and silly. I had to skip an easy 20% to 30% to keep the story flowing in my mind. So tedious and obnoxious, the way things fell into place to make everything justified, understandable, forgivable, and of course enriching and just so lovable and quaint. A real Hallmark rendition of the wife turned slut plot. Loved the tumor, are you sure it was a good idea to have it removed? What are she and the dumb cuck gonna blame when her next episode of Fucking For Fun takes place? Doesn't matter of course, since somehow it won't be her fault. Funny how that tumor made her an enthusiastic slut, but what made her swallow her guilt and remorse and continue to hide her secret whoredom from her husband, while anxiously looking forward to her next fuck fest? You'll think of something. Have fun doing it. And thanks for the effort.

A very enjoyable series and I look forward to many more! Congratulations on a job well done.

Well I'll be damned if this wasn't good adventure, romance and redemption!

Thanks ST!

I am looking forward to the next continuation story. Thank you.

If I ignored the story I'd never know that a tumor can make a woman hurt the man she claims love most in the world in the worst way possible - leaving her wounded husband at the hospital and inviting her lover at her marital residence for a hot fuck session. Thanks saddletramp for this valuable information. And 5 stars for putting all the blame on the boss and elevating Ginger to the status of a damaged, dazed and confused but saintly Joan of Arc figure. Seems like you've finally learnt a few things from the great cuck raac writers of literotica.

I am looking forward to more.5 stars from me

I look forward to seeing the next chapter!

So, this character is to be one of your heroes in future series?

Good. I really enjoyed this one, thank you

Scores 5/5 l look forward to the next tale

So besides being blackmailed she also had a tumor Her tumor called "slutty-noma", nope, nope, nope, Sorry I couldn't stomach the reconciliation. It weakened the story IMHO. Nothing worked after that. I kept reading but it just made me thick. After all she did (forced or not you always have a choice to come clean an look for help) , after all he saw in her mind and all the motherfucker's mind, how can he stand being close to her? I would be okay if he divorced her giving her a nice retirement fund, but this ending didn't feel right.

This is the only comments that makes sense. "If I ignored the story I'd never know that a tumor can make a woman hurt the man she claims love most in the world in the worst way possible - leaving her wounded husband at the hospital and inviting her lover at her marital residence for a hot fuck session. Thanks saddletramp for this valuable information. And 5 stars for putting all the blame on the boss and elevating Ginger to the status of a damaged, dazed and confused but saintly Joan of Arc figure. Seems like you've finally learnt a few things from the great cuck raac writers of literotica."

Love your work Saddletramp1956. This one has some nice avatar type setups....married with some nice nudges on morality. As with all your stuff...It is an engaging read with a plot featuring great timing and pace. Great job.. always like reading masterworks....

You’re creating your own superhero ecosystem! They’re all fun to read, please keep writing.

Really enjoying this series so far, ST. Keep up the good work!!

69 yr. young sci fi lover and love this type of hocom, sometime wish i would wait till a story was thru cause hate waiting for more...LOL.

Loved this story! 5 stars. Please keep them coming.

More great stuff from saddletramp. You’ve got more super heroes on call now than the Avengers. You need to organize saddletramp TV, so we can get some of them on screen. Keep the great adventures coming. They’re the best, by far, recurring serie on LW.

I'm suffering from premature commenting. Only on page one or so but if you've got $200 million you don't need health insurance. Also, if you plead guilty, there's no trial, just sentencing.

But like you say, this is your fiction and it's rules.

Okay, I was wrong about the Man with the X-ray Eyes, wishful thinking on my part. Now I have to switch to the Max Burnage series to discover how he developed his skill set. Thanks, ST.

Max seems unnecessary

Does a brain tumor really excuse her actions? My parents both had brain tumors, and stayed faithful till death...

@AngstIgnored, he got her pregnant because he likely has super sperm!

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I don't care for the Deus ex Machina of the "tumor made her do it."

Taxes on a civil court win are unlikely. INCOME taxes apply to income, not compensatory payments. Stuff like wages, dividends, capital gains, and winnings are income. Cash received from a civil court award or an insurance payout is not income. Okay, okay - it's your universe.

Meanwhile, many thanks to ST56 for some excellent, well edited writing. I appreciate that you use the proper homonym spelling, and know the difference between "your" and "you're".

Now, on to one of the most common errors found here and among almost all current contributors to Lit.

"To lie" is best defined as "to recline." It requires that the subject (the person or thing doing the action) is the same as the object (the person or thing being manipulated).

"To lay" is best defined as "to place." It requires that the subject (the person or thing doing the action) is different than the object (the person or thing being manipulated).

In the present tense, it is correct to say, "I need to LAY the book on the table and LIE down to sleep."

Past tense of "to lie" is "lay." Past tense of "to lay" is "laid." In the past tense, it is correct to say, "I LAID the book on the table and LAY down to sleep."

Sorry about the confusion related to "lay" being used twice here - but that is the official grammar universe, not just mine.

Keep 'em comin'.

So, so so good! Thanks

I know that it's the way SaddleTramp wrote him, but for a supposedly smart 'IT' guy, Cameron sure is dense. Smith and Jones asked him a couple of *very* leading questions, and he didn't clue in that he'd gotten Ginger pregnant the very first time they had sex after she got out of her coma? It wasn't hard to figure out...

I was enjoying this story until two things happened: 1) With $200 million in the bank, blue-eyed idiot still worries about health insurance. 2) Ginger was never evil! She just had a brain tumor that turned her into a nympho bitch! Of Course!

Sorry dude, keep jumping those sharks. I won’t be finishing this one.

She was looking forward to fucking another man on his bed. The bad guys were filthy scum. But they were right about him being a cuck...

Last part drug a little but still good story

This second read was just as good as the first.

Thanks.

I’m abstaining from rating this one, loved the story did not like the fact he chose to stay with the wife, also didn’t like the writer was giving every possible cliche to the wife blackmailed and drugged you say!? Also tumor?! I just lold.

Fun continues, I love the comic book noire feel.