All Comments on 'Flash 02: Career Changes'

I seriously grinned at a few parts of this chapter of your story because you are giving serious hints that you will be adding this character into crossover stories with some of your other established characters. I'd love to see that.

Liked your story so far. I've just stopped laughing over the two guys jacking off in the street. Keep up the good work.

Fan-Bloody-Tastic Story! I'm glad you didn't make him a Superman type hero! Because they wear their undies on the outside (Scares the Kids)

I'm giving You 5 Stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Nice fantasy with a rich dose of SaddleTramp creative imagination and superb story telling ie. Texas Yarn Spinning! Normally stay clear of the Sci-Fi Genre but this is more like Twilight Zone that I loved in an earlier life. Yeah I'm that old, saw them all as new episodes in Black and White.

Like what you are doing with this series. Keep them coming.

Good luck with the remodeling. Some of it's a pain in the butt but if you do it right you will enjoy for years! The best are those things you do yourself with your own hands. Yeah, been there!

Cheers

SAGE

Nice fantasy with a rich dose of SaddleTramp creative imagination and superb story telling ie. Texas Yarn Spinning! Normally stay clear of the Sci-Fi Genre but this is more like Twilight Zone that I loved in an earlier life. Yeah I'm that old, saw them all as new episodes in Black and White.

Like what you are doing with this series. Keep them coming.

Good luck with the remodeling. Some of it's a pain in the butt but if you do it right you will enjoy for years! The best are those things you do yourself with your own hands. Yeah, been there!

Cheers

SAGE

more and make a novell out of it :D

I am really enjoying this tale! I am sensing your trying to head this toward other tales like Max Burnage. Interesting concept. Keep up the great writing and stay healthy!! Really looking forward to the next instalment! 5 stars

Thanks for the entertainment!

Munchie184

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‘… Yes, there were two different nurses…’

Nice try but I don’t buy it. You introduce Judy as if she’d been mentioned in the story already. So, either you were sloppy with character introductions or remembering names.

OK. You really earned those five stars with this chapter.

Good one.

I like Saddle tramp but the end was a bit rushed up. I would have liked to see individual retribution for each.

Anyway, good writing. Over the top but it's a story .

Cheers !

More sci-fi superhero crap. You are like the anti Kalimaxos. Absolute in your approach. Where he insists that there is never a happy ending and no perfect people, you create perfect people with superpowers so that they always have a happy ending. Both sides preposterous

i like it, ST! Looking forward to more! Thank You!

chapter 3 please to where ginger does survive and lives to a full life with cam and their children

5 stars as usual

I dunno what kind of companies you have seen so far. 90 per cent of your stories deal with evil board members who screw either their female employees or their employees' wives. This whole story is well written, as usual. However, the plot is ludicrous.

good story look forward to more

Fun story

Shit just drags on and. He had all that power and they just go to jail.. Fucking pussy MC.rxecxn

Everyman's dream... or nightmare, being able to read minds! Other than not enough punishment for "the gang", the story is good. Several ways for it to go now. Tumor, 200 million, career change, still gaining powers, etc. can't wait!

I'd have let the whore die

she made her choice

stop wasting money on bills and collect the life insurance

Undoubtedly entertaining.

Real problem now, though: now that the whole board have been dealt with, who else can be oppose to Cam? There's no enemy left to fight against, except for Ginger's cancer, so... unless he decides to quit his IT job and become some kind of rogue avenger or something, the lack of antagonists here may turn what was a very exciting read into a lackluster conclusion.

I do trust the author, however, to still have some tricks in his bag for us. We'll see.

I am really enjoying this tale with the sci-fi content and the emotions that Cam is going through. I am looking forward to the rest of this take. Enjoy your work very much.

can't wait for the rest!

Good story. Looking forward to more of it.

5 thumbs up

5* - highly entertaining ! The location I don't care, yes it's sorta sci-fi, yeah it still LW too. Todd172 has the same issue, emulating him is "not bad at all", but I vote keep it LW to make it easy to follow. Nice try at the save for Judy & Lucy, don't worry it doesn't take away from anything. It's a great story and you are very good at telling these.

Puts to shame all those stories with MC's that have military, or judo, etc. I guess it had to be something like this for anyone to penetrate a cabal that nasty. It's comic book stuff, but so what? I will say that anyone who really could read thoughts would go stark raving nuts within a week. D

MORE PLEASE. Thank you. 5 stars, so far.

I love a good read and love your stories.

Good job. Thanks

You’ve written some good stuff consistently. BUT this story is one of the best to date! Agree keeping it in the same genre, for sure. I hope we see part 3 soon so Justice can get some help with bad guys! LOL 5*

5***** again for another great tale!!! Write On!

Outstanding!!!! Didn’t pick up on there being two nurses in “Out of the Blue”. I’ll have to reread that one.

Jack's wife and daughter? How were they involved? I hope that that is in part 3

The tramp has done it again. Another fantastic story! Can't wait to read more.

Trash

-26thNC

Kudos from me, as usual. I'm still not sure about the Judy/Lucy mixup from part 1, but I'm a regular follower and so look forward to your sharing of your imagination.

Loving the new series! 5 Stars!

Wow welcome back, and thank God everything is OK with you. We were worried about you, I know I was. Great story and love the "Saddletramp" treatment. Looking forward to part 3 and more of your great stories. You rock!!!

This should get 6 stars. 5 stars alone for the lines, "I took both Lucy and Judy -- the nurses who cared for me in the hospital -- out to dinner. Yes, there were two different nurses, and I took them out on separate dates." I'm still laughing about this. Great touch, Saddletramp!!!

5/5 reads like a thriller. I thought it was going to be over, that rush to end this chapter????

But am reassured with your implication of more to come.

Thx ST1956, more please.

Is Cam going to zap the tumor with his new powers? or is Ginger growing something that'll give her some powers? So they can go off and fight crime as a team?

One of the best writers on Literotica I always look for your stories.

Another great ride through ST56’s universe. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

Steppinontoes

"He didn't have a body nor did he have any DNA, something that irritated him considerably."

With the way the two hitmen "exploded" in the last chapter, their DNA could and should have been all over his clothing. He was not there when the mess was cleaned up.

You write a great story!

5

Thanks for the story as always thought-provoking and a good read.

Another fine chapter. Thank you.

I love when your stories delve into sci-5!

Nice follow up to part one.

Love it

Damn, it's gotten to where I give your story 5 stars and a favorite before I read it, lol. Excellent story! 25 BIG STARS, AGAIN!

Weak! New he was gonna forgive that bs

Oh. A saddletramp1956 story gearing for RAAC. That is a first for me. I am not a BTB but I do expect consequences on cheating on my preferred stories. But if the author wants RAAC it's his story. Personally if I was Cameron I couldn't stop those memory movies in my head

every time I look at her, how Ginger was anticipating sex with Chad while visiting her husband in hospital AND the way she loved those gangbangs. That is a real deal breaker to me although I could manage friendship after divorce. But this ain't my story.

Please keep it coming!

It does not get much better than saddletramp. Keep it up. LP

In a sea of repetitive BTB and cuckold stories, are a few gems.

Good job on an original concept. I was hearing twilight zone music throughout the read.

Love the story, despite you turning him into an RAAC/CUCK... Ginger was a slut for every board member!!! The fact that she started unwillingly does not excuse that FACT!!! She went along willingly in the end. Please let him at least divorce her, if the brain tumor doesn't take care of her...

People hardly ever recover from brain tumors, I speak from personal experience...

Good old Saddletramp. Always entertaining.

Please keep up the good work and I mean good.

GREAT STORY!!! And I thought my math skills were bad. Keep it coming, hoss. 10 stars because you are the man. Can't wait for the next part. The Bear approves. And don't worry about it being in the wrong category. If it WAS in Sci-Fi, I probably never would have found it. The only thing the bad is guilty of is being afraid or embarrassed to tell her husband when this shit started. Have the Hero sit in the courtroom during each trial, and have their heads explode when they hear the verdicts. They deserve it. Can't wait for the next part.

The BEAR

Don't stop, now. This just getting interesting.

However, this story is distinctly Sci-Fi. Further, it is Non-Consensual Sci-Fi, rather than LW. Sweetie was NOT adventurous … she was, instead, a victim of systematic predators. So I’ll not give it a rating in LW.

The main problem is actually addressed in the story by Smith & Wesson, and that is that Hubby has evolved beyond being a human. His gifts make him invincible regarding almost any evil intentions from humans. When I was a pre-teen, I did not understand why Batman was so popular, given that Superman seemed so much more capable. Later, it dawned on me that having human limitations was what made the Gotham Guy more interesting. He was someone that WE could (if we worked hard enough) could become!

Docs used it on my dad’s prostate.

Whoever came up with it — GREAT IDEA.

Use weak dose gamma rays in tight beam aimed at/through target. Then move ray (or patient) to use ray from another direction, but at target. Then repeat. Weak beam going through flesh at relatively safe levels... except for focused target point, which is hit multiple times. Brilliant.

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So far so good.

Wow, I've said it before, I find it fascinating how you bring the topics to the table. An excellently well told story that really got me excited. Your protagonist has outdone himself and looks realistic down to the last decimal point. It is a real pleasure to read your stories. Thanks for that!

What a joke. Seriously, its a inane ridiculous outrageous joke, so I hope you and your followers are having fun with it. Why not? It appears to be a lot of work and your enthusiasm and commitment to the story are evident. Its like a chef who has decided to perfect a recipe for pork and beans. Why not, if that's what interests the chef. Pork and beans are ok and sometimes fun to eat, but who really gives a shit about pork and beans. But apparently you've got LOTS of extra time to devote to this drivel, so have fun with it.

I am surprised that this great intellectual paranormal power does not include a heightened ability to think logically and clearly. A woman who becomes addicted to being humiliated, dominated, raped, and sodomized, all because if Feels So Good, is mentally dysfunctional. Ginger as portrayed in this story is a sexually addicted sociopath. That means she lacks the mental and moral capacity to function as a strong virtuous woman. She was initially drugged, then voluntarily and enthusiastically became the company whore. You can twist the words and the plot anyway you like, but Ginger chose to be a wanton slut, and conceal her debauchery from her husband so that she could continue being the company whore. You want to claim a valid reconciliation after that betrayal and behavior, have at it. Its just pork and beans, so who gives a shit.

Thanks for the effort.

Truly an outstanding series. Cameron Drake could turn into Justice O Peace, without dying. I always get a kick out of the characters’ names, taken from old tv, moves, athletes… Mr Peabody (and Sherman). Cameron Drake (In & Out). (Alias) Smith and Jones. The villain Chad Wheeler (domestic abuse athlete).

Wow, the comments. Yippee ki yay motherfucker!!! JOP in the 21st century! Great read.

Can't wait like always!

Loved the story. Looking forward to the next story.

Come on ST, remorse doesn't make up for the total lack of trust, complete betrayal and potential murder of his child. If you have him wimp out and take the company whore back you will have perpetuated the ultimate raac. There truly is no justification for being with this slut. How long before she starts fondly remembering being made airtight and craving it again? If there's to be any justice, Cam will put her most humiliating memories on a loop in her mind to be lived day in, day out till she gets back to the place where she wanted to kill herself.

A great story so far. Please continue/finish it.

Love the story, so far... Another Staddletramp's gems...5 Stars... Would love this story to be continued...

Clever to bring in the brain tumor. Helps to justify her positive attitude at being the corporate whore. But I do struggle with the whole abortion thing. That is a humongous betrayal if it was his. So far you have almost glossed over it and made it seem almost trivial.

Also, why would he have stopped mentally attacking the board members? They deserved to suffer. Why end it. Nightmares, maybe constant itching on their genitals, where major scratching is involved, never letting them cum again, eager to be cum slut in jail, and all sorts of other nasty things.

You never did explain why Jack's wife and daughter were criminals. Either they were manipulated or they corrupt. But the way you handled it didn't make it so relevant.

But overall, I love the story and eager for many more chapters. Frankly I see lots of opportunity for healing with the wife, and then helping others. Almost like he could sing and she could eventually wear a red dress ;-). I love your writing and the story line you are developing here.

Be safe.

This story had me on the edge of my seat but now I am left hanging and need Saddle Tramp to let us know when Flash 3 will be forth coming. Please Saddle Tramp, put it in high gear and let us see 3

Any one who don't give you at least 3* needs to go back and read the part where the 2 goons run into the light pole.

I had to stop reading for a while I was laughing so hard,

Ah Judy, the phantom nurse! Nice try at covering a mistake .... sort of ...

Been quite a few years since I indulged in sci-fi stories. Was at a younger age I read them avidly but after awhile migrated to more ‘realistic’ stories and novels. It is a nice return to an author who can make it interesting enough to hold ones attention.

You go guy. Great skills and I thank you.

From one who can prepare reports but can’t make them interesting as you do.

👍👍👍👍🥇🥇

Fun story and sorry I'm just getting around to it.

I'm glad the next chapter is out.

There are two cliches that the author has used in this part which I found absolutely unpalatable. 1. That Ginger could cheat on her gullible husband with her boss but at the same time hated him. It sounds nonsensical. Ginger enjoyed cheating on her hubby so much that she left him at the hospital where he was recuperating from the accident to have sex with her"lover" (and that too on her marital bed?!) That action alone is enough to show what a vile woman she was. You cannot justify the unjustifiable.

2. That any marital problem short of a muder can be solved by a marriage counselor/therapist. Not only the wife was a "company whore" but she also deprived her husband of sex and became pregnant by one of her "lovers" and kept it all secret from her husband. Putting the blame on her boss just doesn't sound right. She WAS the whore, she had made a choice and the choice was that her job was more important to her than her marriage. No therapist or counselor in the world can undo this wrong. Once again I have to say can't believe this cuck raac was written by saddletramp. He's one my favorite writers on this website and simply expected him to write better stories. This one is a downer.

Hope the GammaRay Knife works. LP

It would have made more sense to admit to a mistake with a name mix up than to have two nurses dating a married man. Whether the wife was blackmailed or not, I hope he leaves her.

Very interesting story! Looking forward to many more chapters.

Great chapter, but why stop the nightmares? Life in prison, slowly losing your mind wouldn’t be enough punishment for these guys. Is brain surgery going to be Cam’s next power? We already know he’s going to erase her bad memories.

The section taking down the beard was way to quick. It just seemed like snapping fingers and they were gone. Otherwise a good story.

This series keeps getting better to my way of thinking. So far I've detected two other entertainment venues blended in this story. The main line sounds a lot like The Greatest America Hero with out our hero losing the tech manual and the second was a short borrowing from Star Wars' Obi Wan Kenobi mind games. Now we are getting ready for Cameron's career change and I'm wondering if we will see an appearance of Ray Milland with his X-ray Eyes performing impossible surgeries.

When he melted the phone, I didn't even think that Lisa could divulge the phone call.

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LOL, nice recovery on the names. You likely added that after the comments!

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They won't have a relationship with a married man, but would they respect him if he divorced his wife while she was in a coma?

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If the Feds are already closing in on them, it's probably too late to take Ginger out.

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@johson, yes, I wondered about him using his abilities to cure her, great idea about her developing abilities.

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@Anonymous Re: DNA - Smith and Jones cleaned it up. They obviously have abilities far above our own. Cam's DNA is being altered, maybe they didn't even have to clean it up, just alter it.

This series is a winner! I can see it possibly being sold on Amazon?!?! Thanks SD! Thoroughly enjoying it!

Wish this could happen in real life!

Very good story, for the bad guys, what goes around comes around.

Aha! We now have two nurses; Lucy and Judy to clear up the earlier identity confusion.

Well done you shifty writer, you. As far as addressing Ginger’s mental health with all the psycho babble this was one of the first times I’ve seen where it actually made sense.

This reader is enjoying the way you have added to the SF references from Part 1 with a nod to Ben Kenobi and to Ron Weasley‘s fear of spiders. This just keeps getting better.

Sucks. Pretentious overblown maudlin cuck melodrama that is so full of holes it obviously takes aliens to plug them.

You’re capable of much better than this.

So the simp already forgot her thirsting for Chad's cock while he was laid up in the hospital. WEAK

She may have been drugged and coerced at first, but she was enjoying and looking foward to her whoring by the end.

Well, this story is one of the most interesting stories I have read in quite a while. Top notch submission by this author. Well Done 5+++++Stars.

Hated reading Ginger has a brain tumor. I lost 3 friends from them in 7 years. They were all 3 48 years old.

Use the Force Luke!

I suspect the author went out of his way to make Ginger's actions less execrable based on her circumstances and her emotions in order to rehab a reconciliation. Would have been easier to swallow if he hadn't learned in thr hospital her obsessive need to fuck Chad in heir marital bed. The reasons given on page 1 of this chapter make no sense. I get that she was still under Chad's sway (maybe no longer fake financial crime, but all the sex with clients and Chad and the Board) and was worried about Chad's safety but why would she WANT to do it. And unless her husband is terrible in thr sack, the physical pleasure from her rapist Chad would not overcome her hatred for Chad and the others. Seeing as this was the author's goal, would probably have made more sense for the wife to in thenfirst chapter 1 have instead been actively worried about her husband, at least internally, someyhing like after all that has happened and what she has suffered, she couldn't lose him and seeing him in the hospital terrified her as she had been doing it, to some degree, for Cam anyways. I realize the author did not want a full reveal too early in the first chapter, but toning it down to something like her being there more often but thinking that "damn, she has to see Chad, he is demanding her tonight to do it in their house" as opposed to "I can't wait for Chad's big cock to fill me up". The latter is irreconcilable even with Stockholm syndrome. As an aside, in regards to a commone theme in LW stories, why is having more sex a solution to being blackmailed about not disclosing extramarital sex to a husband? Huh? OK false criminal prosecution, financial ruin for the family, and physical harm or death of a loved one is a different story. But more blackmail sex to cover up extramarital sex, makes no sense. It gives the blackmailer more power and recordings to use to get his way. It puts the blackmailee more in his thrall. The exception might be to buy a bit more time to get help or do something fast to change the situation, but only if the husband is Old Testament and would divorce regardless of the circumstances. Anyways I think softening her thoughts in Chapter 1 would have made things easier to semi-justify in chapter 2 and 3 without having to do some seriously twisted and frankly not believable explanations for her behavior, the worst of which is again her thoughts of pure lust and desire while her husband is in the hospital. Sigh.

I'd pay full price to see this movie! Written with feeling and wildly creative. A joy to read.