All Comments on 'Five Trailers, Lot E'

Thank you for finishing this set, JimBob. We already knew the folks in Lot E were trouble, but getting the after stories for Lots A-D was worth the wait. And who knows, maybe Joee will find something to bring her alive in Nevada. Maybe not, but I'll bet there will be a pretty good story about it.

A really good story - Thanks for sharing.

Very confusing

I thought the first 3 pages were excellent but the story got ragged in page 4. I found too many new characters were added near the end. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Seems to me you operate for.the lowest common denominator.

About pond scum, by pond scum, for pond scum.

Get a life.

I like the series, you were right, you gave yourself a hard act to follow but you managed to do it. Bringing familiar characters and places together with new characters, places and situations was really entertaining. Thanks for writing!

I am glad to see that Summer Duhon got a happy ending.

Extraordinary tour de force. How does he do it?

Too many characters and too many places. Way too confusing to me and not a whiff of romance to be found. I usually like your writing but this one not very much, too disorganized.

Great story, enjoyed reading how the characters from the trailer lot were doing. As for the complainers, just ignore them. Some people complain just to complain and Jimbob does not mean redneck. It just means you have a first name and a middle name. Five stars as usual. Thanks for sharing your work with us.

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I think the story worked well as a stand-alone, but I needed/wanted to reach back a bit to recall everyone’s backstory. That’s why I love the ending index of characters and their story appearances. Of all the characters, Brenda Jo-ee was the most fascinating. What a survivor, though seemingly left devoid of any human sympathies. The mentioned Concrete Blonde inspiration helps explain who she is. Thanks for the new story, and for the expansion and resolution of the older story lines.

It is good no complaints and all swell to me! Enjoyable reading and I was entertained so 5 stars from me! Enjoyed the widely divergent characters! When you first wrote about Brenda Jo/Joee she didn’t appear that damaged just desperate to escape so I assume that brought about the change! I did not catch it in the story but assume all five in the mobile home Brenda Jo/Joee’s father, brothers and two women died! Guess might have to read it again to see!! A stray thought the married women whose credit card was declined for drugs in the trailer will that minor character pop up again in a future story of her background?!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading!

Great series. Your writing skills and story telling get better every time. Well done!

can't believe that brainless whore gets to live