All Comments on 'Five Trailers, Lot C'

Really enjoyed that one, yeah. What else you got?

I didn't think Lot B could be topped, but you did it. As always loved this story.

Literotica for the rednecks

as usual it was really good

I'm with deblackbuster on lot B , but this one was up to your usually high standard 5*s as usual, thanks for the read .

I just checked you as a "Favorite Author". You earned it.

Thanks for sharing a great story!

Just a brilliant FUNNY romantic story. Characters were great and loved the dialog! 5+

I continue to be impressed with your ability to consistently produce great stories about "regular" people. Thanks for sharing.

And poor sister never gets screwed?

Thanks for a fun story.Happy endings are kewl!!!

Thanks for this.

I love the characters and especially love your sense of humor. I also love the dialog. Mostly. Maybe it's a Louisiana thing or a spell checker run amok, but phrases like "I'm going this" or "we going that" would be less jarring if you used "gonna" as the vernacular, instead.

On the not-so-good side, though, is that there is no plot to this story. It's too much to discuss in a comment, but feel free to send me a PM if you want to talk about it.

This one was especially good with a double romantic ending!!

Ya'll done and did it again. Thanks from Texas.

My impression is that you usually write good stories in vernacular about very lowlife folks, so your stories usually leave me wanting a shower. This story was set in the same universe, with the same vernacular, but these were good, decent folks, and the story left me feeling good about the world and myself.

I think you just did that so that I will read your next story not expecting a depressing ending, and then WHAM! Slut winds up alone with 3 kids working nights at Walmart, drinking to excess, raising another generation of lowlifes, while boyfriend does time in prison.

Great story!!

Thanks again for posting.

Dude, use proper English when your characters are speaking. Other than that it was ok.

Chur bro awesome story

I love your stories. Please keep writing

But i simply love your stories. You are the only author on this site that makes me open it everyday at lo ing wives section to check if you posted anything. The way you write its simple the best. No other aouthor aproch this level of mastering. Most if not all are focusing on the drama the bitch or bastard to burn and how, or how to excuse a cheating spouse whitout the other becoming a wimp. They forget that at the end of the day a story no mather wat should bring a smile at the end of it. And my good sir that is what you do. I read all of your stories over and over. Never failed to make me smile at the end of each one even the most heart wrenching ones. And not because the bitch got burned or the toatal drama, but because of the banter between your characters like dave rose daisy and susan. It makes you wish that men and woman so easy going and good natured loving and fun to be with you can find in real life. Your aproach to romancing and spi ing a tale never failed to make me smile all day when i red one of your stories. Wiht high regards Adrian. P.S. on my phone so i cant login gonna post it as anon unfortunatly

Top notch piece of fiction sir

This is your typical love story of rich girl meets poor boy, but wit a Big Twist. This is one of a very few on this site where the girl was a "little person", much less her mother. When they both find their perfect mates in an uncle and nephew is sounds corny, but was actually very sweet. Well written. Keep it up.

I really enjoy your work. Don't let the nay sayers get you down

John L. In Kansas

Yeah, once you got the sex right all other aspects of a relationship just fall into place. And if the ass fucking is amazing, you might as well start planning the 50th wedding anniversary party.

Tried to focus on the romance, but all I kept thinking while reading was that you don't have to live in a trailer to be trailer trash.

Love at first sight is a very romantic concept. So is eternal life, and the check is in the mail.

Thanks for the effort. It reads like a romantic cartoon. Which makes it still a romance, just a ridiculous one.

Good story. Great characters. Good humorous dialog. Keep ''em coming. 5*

Once again thanks for your stories, if you wrote books I would buy.

I can't keep thinking up ways to say that you are the best writer on this site, but I feel I need to. There are a lot of good writers here, but somehow you just form a connection with your characters that carries through the page.

Love this family

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

You are great at making it real. Good work!

I love this story. So full of hope for the future. Good one.

I don't know how you do it; when other writers do dialect it grinds the story to a halt. When you do, the story

flows.