All Comments on 'First Swap'

Hilarious story! Loved it!

Outstanding storytelling is front and centre in this excellent drama, with memorable characters, and a plot that never ceases to hold the attention of the reader from start to finish. Well-written by the author, this is a Five Stars story. The love scenes are icing on the cake.

I understand this is fantasy but some of the logic doesn't track. Blackmail is wrong and forcing someone to do something their not comfortable is wrong. The relationship is a farce.\

I stopped reading when Dan complained about his wife playing with the other woman so much. Totally unrealistic ! No heterosexual guy would ever act that way. Two unrealistic stories in a row. I’m done. Only a 2. No smiles.