All Comments on 'Elves' Tale: A Christmas Romance'

For the first time on here, reading a story was not about me or what I got out of it but about the characters and what they could tell and teach me. This story is absolutely wonderful and I feel honored to have read it. Thank you for sharing it with us.

That was the most amazing beautiful story I have read on this site or any other! Thank you for writing it. I wish I could give it more than five stars!!!!

Beautiful! Very heart warming and lovely. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story.

Thank you for sharing your masterpiece; this story trully embodied the Christmas spirit (love and selflessness).

There, but by the grace of God, go I (John Bradford). Misfortune can befall any one of us given the right or wrong situation. This heartfelt story spoke to me of gratitude - being thankful for the people and the comforts I have in my life, and mindful not to judge people. The whimsical aspect of the story spoke to the kid in me and the ability to believe (hope) in the goodness of people and finding love everlasting.

There has been many stories written with many themes submitted to this web site . The author has reached out to the readers , giving them a story that touches them in the Heart . If there was ever an Case for a " 10 " Star Rating system , this is it . Should the Author continue with this Quality of writing then I strongly advice that they quickly seek out a Publisher , so that this talent could be enjoyed by all .

Season's Greeting

This Story was definetely a marvellous emotional and sensual art that touched at my all feelings . Tusen tack :)

this story would be beautiful even without the sex.

a truly wonderful tale and a joyful ending

Feel the "Romance" in this story is the driving force rather than the "Lesbian Sex" so, imo, this story should be under the former category rather than the latter.

Correction (as you requested): Daphne earned a "Master of Social Work" (note capitals and no possessive). She would be professionally known as Daphne Winston, MSW.

This romance is excellent. I especially liked the way Ellen and Daphne fell in love with each other and then made love. Ellen had never made love to a woman before' but somehow that did not matter. She had no homophobic prejudices and no guilty feelings, and neither did Daphne. They loved each other and showed it gloriously.

The magical aspect of the story, when Chris Norling was revealed to be the real Santa Claus and transformed both of these wonderful women into elves, was almost unbelievable, but if only magic could heal Daphne, then I was willing to accept it. Why, however, did our heroines get those pointed ears?

Ears, along with a slight figure seem to be a "standard" physical characteristic of elves. If you look at google images for elves, you can see what I mean.

For the previous commenter, I'm aware of what a MSW is. I didn't want to use too much jargon, or make the story too US centric by having nomenclature that wouldn't be the same in other English speaking countries.

As far as the category (Romance vs Lesbian Sex), it's a bit of a tossup, but there are many, many stories that are primarily romances in the Lesbian Sex category. In the end, I decided that the people most interested in reading the story would be the readers of the Lesbian Sex category.

This story is strange

Lovely. Thankyou.

a wonderful story, thank you so much!

L

The ending was perfect. This story was amazing.

I absolutely love this story! It was wonderful. This should be made into a movie, of course there would be some changes to keep it out of the porn catagory (or maybe that would work too). I really enjoyed the romance in the story and how Emily could see past the wheelchair and notice the person sitting on it. I'm 75% blind and it's hard for people to look past a disability and not treat you a real person.

Keep up the good work, it was wonderful!

JS

You made me cry multiple times, thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story with us!

I stumbled across this story by accident and very appropriately I stumbled on Christmas Eve. A truly lovely Christmas story, beyond charming. That says it all.

A seriously good story, change the lesbian relationship to a very special friendship and I can see this as a Disney Christmas film, it's that good.

I assume you are a reader of Mercedes Lackey and other fantasy authors. It would make a very good fit in her 500 kingdoms stories.

I'm a sucker for Christmas romances and this is right at the top of my list. Thank you.

I am a sucker for the happy ending story. There is so much more to recommend this story.

A little magic mixed with Christmas Spirit makews a wonderful story. Maybe Santa IS real after all.

This story was AWESOME! Loved every bit of it.

I hope Sarah was asked.