All Comments on 'Edge of Breaking Ch. 02'
by JimBob44
- 16 Comments
Omniferisover 5 years agoThis one is better than the first chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
ender2k2kover 5 years agoI hope they are given the life together they deserve. Thanks
InPennyInPoundover 5 years agoAm really getting into this story. Wasn't sure after the first chapter. Thought it might go the way of a FFM three some, which isn't my thing, but this chapter leaves me wanting more.
jenorma2012over 5 years agopart 2 is even better than part one, will Gracie ask Nancy to move in with her and will Gracie overcome her OCD with Nancy's help can't wait for part 3
gwalk91over 5 years agoWhen I started reading the first chapter I must admit I was confused. Then as I finished it and now reading this chapter I will say that I am pleasantly surprised. I love how the story is coming together and really hope you continue. And if I may ask, do you see Nancy and Gracie actually having a session together with her therapist maybe to get a little more insight on what Gracie is dealing with or a possibility of Nancy going to ask for advice on how to help Gracie? Sorry if that was too much, just really excited and intrigued by your story and characters.
Chironomidover 5 years agoThis story is drawing me in, making me care about the characters. I'm looking forward to the rest of this!
Anonymousover 5 years agoMinus Gracie's emotional episodes here and there, things have been going really good for her so far. And she's made a lot of accomplishments... I'm just hoping this doesn't all go sideways lol0
deblackbusterover 5 years agoOr both? It's switched a bunch of times. Great story so far. Looking forward to chapter 3, hopefully it's a happy ending.
TSreaderover 5 years agoA wonderful story! With much pain there's love! Thank you for sharing it with us!
Anonymousover 5 years agoCan't wait to read more! But Nancy is pregnant and drinking beer? That's not good for the baby! I know it's just a story, but I worry.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoNever read Lez stories. Saw family name and got sucked in. Now I cant wait for Chapter 3. You are such a good writer. Thank you. Keep 'em coming. s/ Just Jay
Ravey19almost 3 years agoA few little glitches but not enough to warrant marking down this excellent story of a girl fighting and partially over coming her deep held fears with the help of friend and slowly developing lover. 5 stars
Anonymousover 1 year agoYou have your own unique style, great stuff, thank you for sharing it so generously.
Anonymousover 1 year agoContinuing to enjoy this story. Agree with what Ravey19 stated. Looking forward to Gracie and Nancy's relationship.
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