by JimBob44
Great story, really loved it. Five stars as usual. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
Your stories just seem to flow off the page with a life of their own. Thanks for sharing them.
Good story with a meaning. Also as always I marvel at the character history at the end. 5*
Good story, if a little light.
You lost 4 stars with the juvenile THE END. that's fourth grade stuff. Seems it also means no sequel and that would be a loss.
Nice little Monday morning read to start off the week. JimBob is always able to flesh out characters is a very short amount of time, truly talented. Thank you, sir!
Rnebular
Another fun story from the fun world of JB44. 5 stars, and thank you for it.
Man, I registered an account on here just so I could tell you how much I love your stories and the world you've created to house them. I especially love the way you write dialog. Thanks so much for sharing them with us.