All Comments on 'Deflowering the Boy'

Enjoyed this story. You seem a little insecure though. You tell a good story with the right amount of details. Other authors with their one page works could learn a lot from you

I love your stories. Can’t wait for the next one.

That Kayleigh would be the one the Doctor fell in love with, but it seems that he refuses to do that like you said. It just seems sad because unlike the others, Kayleigh didn't love another and therefore was waiting for her time to be up.

I'm still glad to see the first story of the new year from you. Waiting for your next tale seems like forever.

Good story overall, but there were a lot of grammar errors.

Shame the tags didnt include rape. Would have saved time reading some of this.

Just wish there was a bit less downers like the bad home situations and the dead people. Instead, maybe a little more focus on the characters aside their backgrounds, as in it's porn, so stuff on what they prefer, how they act in bed and etc. would have been nice. The sex scenes were a bit simple in this.

Really enjoyed reading this story. I don't normally read stories with this subject matter so it was a pleasant surprise.

Thanks for such a great read. 👍

I love the content

great story too bad Kayleigh got dumped. I haven't looked at your other stories (which will be sorted out )perhaps you could recommend my next reading adventure to be? anyway a great story

I don't know what people see in your stories. I think they're shit