All Comments on 'Daddy Writes Erotica Ch. 02'

I particularly like the using the fact of writing literotica into having real (sic) incestual sex. If may be all fantasy but it makes it all somehow plausible. I am not sure about the anal sex... but only because I think that is an acquired taste for somewhat older women and I have trouble imagining a young woman asking for it.... But what the hell, it's a fantasy!

One writing tip... You successfully stayed in the first person this time (well done!)... I think you will find these stories read much better, particularly online, with much shorter paragraphs.

Other than that... cool. If it makes you feel optimisitic, my writng these kind of stories led directly to sex with much younger women, not my daughters, but young sexy things anyway..... sigh. Thank God for Literotica.

-aswpc

I love the relationship between father and daughter. If it were me, I would keep him for myself and not involve my friend, Sara!

Left Dad scratching his head I bet. Came in all the places she had. Wow...Pretty damn hot...Looking forward to the continuation.

oh god Daddyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..i am so fucking hotttttttttttt right now.please hurry with chapter 3...giggles

patti

I WANT A DADDY LIKE YOU. MY PUSSY NEEDS TO BE FUCKED BY YOU

This chapter was a lot better than the first one. I think you might have gone overboard on how slutty Patti is, and it is highly doubtful that a virgin would ASK for anal her first time having sex, especially if the member is a fat monster like you have endowed your male character with. Still a good read, I'm off to chapter 3 now..lol

This series is wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for making me wet and ready to fuck! What an awesome author you are!

Highly erotic!!

My personal fave is when incest stories also involve a female who wants her ass tongue fucked, thanks for including that, the rest of the story was great , that detail made it excellent...