by Tx Tall Tales
Please keep this story going! There is a lot of situations that you still can explore! Thanks for the great story!
I love that deb took the control. she has such a good heart. giving Joe what every man would love to have. love the description of doing the anal. It is one of my favorite positions, both giving and receiving. keep up the stories.
I absolutely love the character development being in sync with the story line. I have to admit that I'm a bit if a sucker for the Debbie type characters in society. Such a woman can be a great asset if they trust enough to be trusted (if you can pick up what I'm putting down). I was worried about what I'd feel when it finally came time for her to be shared. What I found was that you wrote this chapter perfectly, with her being in control. Quite possibly, the ONLY way for it to be as hot AND believable as it was. Kudos sir!!!
Good scene with Joe. Well done. With Debbie's history with men, if SHE hadn't been the one in control - the Boss for the night - then it would have looked like emotional abuse. With Jack shareing her, knowing how fragile she can be and so eager to please. Looking foreward to more.
I could have done without this. It did nothing for me. Jim joe and anyone else added detracts from the core group.
The only thing missing was me there. I would be glad to patently watch until Deb asked 'who's next?' Although I would probably come on my own the moment they lifted Beth up for the two end act, I can imagine myself be ready again by then.
Ditch the extra guys and toss in a couple of the girls with strapons.
I’ve been reading this for almost three hours now. I’m still as hard as when Karen jerked Jack off in Ch 1. I haven’t cum yet (not due to a lacking story) and I’m not even halfway through yet so presumably it’ll be about 7 AM when I finish. Thank you for an amazing story.
Tag teaming Karen or Cathy is one thing. Debbie and Beth should have been off limits.
Sharing Beth and Debbie with another man is a BIG NO NO, it’s the start of a steep and slippery slope. 1*.