All Comments on 'Coming In Third'

I enjoyed reading this but as it went on I started to wonder just what kind of shit was going to drop on him. I guess it could have gone either way, a clean get away like you went for or the cop framing him somehow. Great stuff.

Well written and kept my attention.

Keep up the good work.

that last bit of fun will catch up sooner than you think, TK U MLJ LV NV

Fun and hot.

Fun story. Thanks.

Very nice! Thanks!

RR, This is a Funny Hot and Erotic story. I applaud his making it with 3 generations of women in this family. I’ll even bet “grandma” would have liked another chance with Dave. Thank you!

The timing is about right for Catlin to be his illegitimate daughter. I was expecting Amy to shout that out as he drove away. Great story. I gave it a five.

Nah, I'm not going to try to sneak incest content into a category other than incest LOL

She is without a doubt, not his daughter. I even had it in my head that she's actually the cop's daughter. Mom may be promiscuous and volatile, but I had it in my head that she has a value system. If she's separated a new pony from the herd, she puts the old one back in the stable before she saddles up the new one ;)

His tryst with her mom follows the same system, because she'd dumped him beforehand - even if it was only something she did in the heat of the moment and ended up coming to recant that night.

Here's hoping her college is near him. And hoping she loves getting back at her parents through the best sex of her life. And hoping grandma's into it. Basically I'm saying, that was great and would love some more!

Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

I really liked this one.

Ending made me smile.

You write some great stories. This was my tenth story of yours I’ve read and so far the best one. I’ll give you a 10 on this one! Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.

Fabulous. Thanks. Neat story.