by mgw858
Having lived a time of the sort that you write about, I could see it all happening, and it brought back my own luscious memories. Well done, especially for a first effort.
Thanks for your authenticity compliment ... this was a very bittersweet writing as it was quite a while after our adventures ended -- and although we still share the occasional tame email -- this was the last of many stories I wrote for/with this lovely woman ... mgw
Thanks for sharing this wonderfully erotic part of your life. I loved the two voices, the depth of emotions and level of eroticism. It is one of my favorites now!
Great story! Hopefully you will consider sharing more with us. :-)