All Comments on 'Cast Adrift'

Story, but I can't help worry over what happened to kitty. Did I miss something or did she just vanish into the eather?, maybe I'm just picky but a sorta conclusion as to what happened would have been nice.

Another great JimBob story! Well told with wit and some great writing.

This was a great story but felt cheated at the unanswered question of what happened to kitty why she ran and what became of her.

Maybe another chapter?

Still 5/5 for the story itself for me

Well done. I usually stop after a couple of chapters as most go from first meet to same old sex scenes in about 3 paragraphs. Your story line to go along with the sex kept me reading to the end.

Fantastic as always. I couldn’t put it down until I finished! So glad you’re writing again. Thanks for sharing with us.

You know it's going to be amateur hour when the first female described is led with her cup size. So childish.

What a ridiculous set of character names.

Great story! Hope this second kid is his, but i doubt it. I hope this doesn't turn into a cuck story, that would be disappointing.

This took an unexpected dark turn...whenever I read any of your stories I feel like the people are real, not archetypes who have perfect bodies, lives, careers, etc, but real people. That all the stories are interconnected makes them all the better.

I, too, would like to know what happened to Kitty...she needs, no...deserves a happy ever after.

I enjoyed this story, but cant help feel cheated that Kitty was just introduced, then up and disappears especially since I got the feeling she may have been another Roland child. I hope there is a second part to this.

5 BIG STARS. Great story!

I try, and fail, at seeing if I can recall the characters from another story. 5* Great story.

Very good. I was expecting kitty to be yet another family member, maybe daughter of Roland and another of his sisters.

It's a great day when another JB44 story shows up. Another 5 stars for this one. I just wish Vixen, his MIL/Aunt, would have fucked his brains out consoling him. Maybe in another chapter.

A totally random "The End" does not an end make. It just means you got bored and lost the thread of your own writing.

Good story, but feel sorry for Kitty

It's a good day when we get another JB44 story. And this was a very good story even by your normal standards. There were enough twists to keep me wondering (poor Passion, poor Vixen) where this was going next. Like a few other commenters I'd love to know more about Kitty ...but Lilah has my interest too. Does the good Reverend know about his stepdaughters? Does Lilah still get it on with her ex? And finally, thank you for continuing to tell us all the interesting things going on in the Atchafalaya Basin!

Please make a part 2 where the family meets everyone

Please don't stop it here keep it going

Well that sucked … I enjoyed it up until kitty left .. the rest was nonsense

I enjoy all your stories please write more. God Bless

Pretty good story till Passion got pregnant. All over for me at that point. Everyone knows what birth control is.

A few humble opinions from this reader:

1. I think I have stumbled upon your secret sauce for your stories. You created.a universe filled with places like Bender, Benhurst, Pine Oak, etc. Each of the places has a population of people and places that will help facilitate how characters will interact and thus become the basis of your stories.

2. Over the years, I have seen you maintain a certain level of wish fulfillment with certain characters.

3. Over the years, your stories have been getting longer. This one is 34k words, which is about one half of a commercially published novel. That's quite impressive.

4. It takes a lot of courage to inject as much tragedy as you into your stories. Over the years, your characters have been overcoming obstacles. Or succumbing to them. I genuinely enjoy the paths that they take.

5. I've commented this before but so much of "life" happens during mundane events such as cooking or other daily chores. I've always felt this to help add an element of realism.

6. One of my main gripes with your character development model is that people say "I love you" as a result of sexual attraction. Maybe that's more realistic than my own ideal of choosing a quality partner rather than one based on lust. I don't know.

7. Finally, your recent works have downplayed graphic sex for the sake of graphic sex but build up to it. Keep up the good work.

Entertainment at its best!!

So first story of yours I have read and it was wonderful. I hope there is more I have so many questions how will things turn out for the MC what happened to Kitty?

NOT BAD BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO KITTY? THE THINK THAT WAS A BETTER STORY TO BE TOLD!

It seems like you didn’t know how to resolve Kitty’s issues, so you just gave up on her character. Disappointing.

Stopped reading on page 2 at the 32E chest.

Enjoyable reading time! Really pulled characters from your other stories - I didn’t even get half of them. Well put together story!’

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading!

This was a great story. However we need a sequel to know what happened to Kitty, if she has resolved her issues, how Priscilla and Lowell lives will turn out, and if Lowell will go and visit his family.

This was an excellent story for 90% of it. I'm disappointed. What happened to Kitty? Why was she so traumatized? Did she recover? It would have been nice for her and Lowell to get together in the end. Lowell was an idiot to screw Priscilla without any kind of protection. Just what a widowed father with a very young daughter needs is a pregnant, goofy girlfriend. Where did all of the True* surnames come from? I think that JimBob44 just ran out of ideas at the end but I still rate this story 5/5.

STUPID IMMATURE STORY ENDING UP WITH PRISCILLA

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Thank you for sharing your story, it was very entertaining. I also like that you include where I can find other characters and their stories. It seems to me that you left several threads hanging though. What happened to Kitty? What happens next with Lowell?

Is there a follow up to these and other plot lines under different story names?

Loved it. Lots of tuists and turns. Very good read. Thanks.

Yeah, good story that needed another chapter to clarify some characters and an outcome for Lowell at his long lost aunts. Too many things left hanging that will probably never get answered as this was published in 2021.