by stansb
Really? You have all your life to think of a story idea and you come up with a glory hole. Damn.
Fast forward to were she leaves him for a better husband and rewarding life
Or even were Hailey kicks in his balls when he tries to touch her and the wife sues for divorce
You would expose your wife to the kind of random strangers that would hang out at an adult bookstore? If course, there is a nine inch black dock there. You suck fuck.
It might be exciting to watch your wife sucking another man's cock but taking her to an ABS is too risky. Next time pick one you both like, invite him home with you for a short arm check and then see if you feel adventurous when you get him home.
Your writing wasn't horrible compared to some, but a gloryhole is a really ugly subject, probably belongs in fetish and is just sickening to read about - even for a fictional fantasy. Can you say "nasty" and NOT in a sexy or erotic fashion?
Keep going, thanks for the story and allowing scoring and comments
Now take the challenge, take these two, and show how Randy she is for sex, especially sex with hubby that is Loving; but without crudity or convoluted plot. Maybe you meet a thick AF old Chicano good Samaritan when he renders roadside aid to your broken car in the CA desert?
LOL, just trying to get myself inside he hot little body.
My wife just loves extra cock. She has had three extra cocks in a bar that we visited while on vacation in Gulf Shores Alabama.See you if you're there the next time she will be hot tot trot!
The idea of a "normal" wife who suddenly cuts loose can be very erotic. Sadly, apparently some commenters don't understand that in the world of fictional make believe , STD and consequences don't exist. That makes this story hot. Good job.
Our marriage (30 years plus) has been most eye opening in the past five when the kids had flown away for their own opportunities. From adult parties to discovering glory holes, we now celebrate our mutual fun, As I turn away from this story and see if my hubby liked it, I check the amount of rigor in his slacks, A true eroticism meter. I liked it; he was hoping that the wife had not changed so dramatically so quickly,
Some guys enjoy the fantasy of seeing their prim and proper wives suddenly become ravenous sluts craving cocks and cum. Others...don’t. The LW readers seem to be split on that fantasy roughly 50/50.
I look forward to the sequel. Thanks for contributing.
Some negative comments deride the idea of the gloryhole and anonymous sex; I find it hot and fantasize about having taken my wife to them when we were younger. Seems to me it's not unlike fucking a living vibrator that squirts! That cock could be on an adonis or a fat troll but it's still a cock and it is still a story!
I would not have believed that even SwingerJoe would think that exposing his wife to the human garbage in an adult bookstore is ok. Lost a lot of respect for him as that is way beyond the pale.
I'll never understand why some people don't understand the meaning of fantasy. I think the haters are embarrassed by their own fantasies so they take it out on others. Great story!
Delicious. That would be sexy. I’d love to see my wife sucking another man’s cock. Mmm…
My first wife was a cumslut I didn't know until the night she came home drunk and horny and wanted me to eat her pussy what I did not see her cunt was full of other man's cum until my tongue was up her pussy
You'd be surprised how many horny wives resort to this!
Orpheum69
"She bobbed her head slowly taking the head in and out of her mouth for a few seconds. Impatiently, I reached out and started pushing on the back of her head forcing her to take the swollen member deeper into her mouth. She placed her hands on the wall giving me resistance because the head was reaching the back of her throat. I added some pressure to the back of her head and continued to force the dick all the way down her throat until she couldn't take anymore. She pulled off quickly when she had reached her limit and coughed for air. "
You lost me at this point.
Shoving a d*ck so far down her throat that it's blocking her airway and she can't breathe isn't erotic, it's dangerous.
Don't do that.