All Comments on 'Business is Business'

by mtnman2003

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cloudycloudyalmost 20 years ago
Very hot!

Where can I find a job like that! Nice, sexy story, sweetheart.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Stimulating

Brilliant. Half way through I was ready to cum...

and I did before the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Minor change

I don't think that the mother should have been part of the story. It just seemed unnecessary. Otherwise, Great Story!

VoluptuousValkyrieVoluptuousValkyrieover 14 years ago
Was hot...then lukewarm

Originally, I liked the story, minus the tense changes, but when I got to the end I was totally turned off by the mother's reappearance. It bugs me that authors keep slipping extra folks into 'Erotic COUPLINGS', threesomes are not a couple...they belong in 'GROUP sex'

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