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Whitewaterbum2 months agoYou have reset the pieces for another tale. Sean first priority is to fing a very good general or just a manger with experience in the food industry. He can set pub up to be efficient and friendly. Don’t know where mystery comes in unless there a body buried in the cellar. LOL
dgfergie2 months agoStill good writing but not much action in this instalment, looking forward to the next chapter, 4 stars
LitCrit2 months agoAaahh - now I'll have to revise my rating after the revised version posts. i was going to accuse you of fashioning a rather dull and slow first chapter, but now we'll have to wait and see. Average as submitted, expecting something better soon.
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SanityCheck@SanityCheckYou may read my multi-part submissions with confidence as all my stories are complete before the first part is published. I typically publish near the first of the month. There may be occasional exceptions, but generally if there is no new story by the seventh, there won't b...
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