All Comments on 'Bit of a Bitch, Chaos'

Excellent!

Fantastic! Loved every word of it. Great to see Barry in action. 5 big stars! Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

sometimes esp at the start it felt a bit like to many things in to short a time. That said the overall arch was satisfying and the characters are the type you root for. So thank you for writing, I enjoyed it greatly

I can’t say I hate anything you write, though I seriously dislike this story. It’s a toxic relationship from the get go and borderline abuse and preying on a vulnerable teen. Barry is a caricature of a man and nowhere close to being the good man his father or uncle are. I hope I’m some future story we hear where Theresa wises up (or her mother talks some sense into her) and she dumps Barry for someone worthy.

You know some things. You tell good stories about interesting folks. 5*

Good story!

5

A bit different, but a a good read!

I kept waiting for something bad to happen. Toward the end, I figured she’d gotten pregnant. Nice ending for a couple of nice characters.

Nice story, if seriously in need of a proofreader.

Barry is the kind of Dom I try to be, in that he;s very loving toward his sub and only uses pain as a seasoning and not as the main course.

Looking forward to your next chapter. Good work!

I busted out laughing on the bent plastic spoon in the Author Note!🤣 Thankfully I was at home alone and not out in public or I would have been thought cray - at least crazier! All good entertaining reading - keep writing what you want - definitely works for me! I really enjoy your Authors Note at the end - top notch and much appreciated!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.

Thanks for sharing your work!