All Comments on 'Betraying the Betrayer'

The revenge was absolutely brutal.

I wonder if husbands even I could ever do that.

I guess I would stop at blackmailing for money.

But I would try to fatten her up and say those words..

"You're just a fat, stupid, gigantic pussy!".

An outrageous story, but a really fun read. Thanks. Please keep writing.

Meh, very boilerplate and includes almost all of the typical LW tropes. Well written, just absolutely no new ground covered here. Thanks for sharing.

He should have shot her in self defense

A bit over the top but a definite fun read. Well worth a 5

Funny, in a sick sort of way.

A listing of single sentences??

"She told me she was too tired from her workouts and encouraged me to take care of myself." - That makes no sense, since their sex life picked up, at first, so she's obviously lying.

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Forget the stupid gadgets, not to mention that he'd need a password to use the WiFi.

Timeline was way too drawn out. Living as a cuck for a year? Pretty cliché, with all the surveillance and drugs....

Crazy but funny

That was fun. What a novel way to get his revenge by switching the drugs. Very good story.

@mebular

Missed the tropes for red hair, twins, and parents dying in an auto/airplane accident.

Very good story.

Fun, in that rubbernecking a car wreck sort of way, but utterly ridiculous.

Eh, kind of mundane. First of all, the guy even if he injected estrogen, would not get big results. Testosterone is much stronger than estrogen, trans women take androgen blockers for that reason. Also estrogen doesn't cause the hair to fall out, quite the opposite. It does suppress body hair, though.

Fanciful, but fun. I enjoyed it for the fun romp it was.

Scores 3/5

3. Interesting and well deserved revenge but completely fails on the erotic side of things. A revenge erotic story where the only people getting laid in graphic detail is the "bad guys" of the story just isn't that appealing. Similar problem with another of the authors stories, the MC just not getting any fun of his own. I think a good revenge story on Lit should involve both the revenge itself and some bedroom antics as part of it. Sex was the reason for the revenge, only fair sex being part of the revenge.

Dumb but a lot of fun.

Very well played Lickme35 Sir/Ma'am!!!

Very enjoyable tale of a well thought out and executed BTB revenge classic!!

Exceelllleeeent!!

1 star - not my kind of story.

My favorite kind of story! Thank you. 5 BIG FAT TWINKLING STARS!

Different sort of story, enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your writing.

They suspected his thyroid and ended up surgically removing it.

rolf wth dont go to that hospital

to bad nut houses dont exist anymore these 2 need to be in one

Loved It!!

What a pathetic load of bollocks, I had to give it 1 star as you can't give less

Over the top but great fun to read.

4.5/5

Love it !

@moultonknob its funny you mention pathetic and bullocks because that's exactly what I think of you 😂 FFS it's a parody he's purposely being farcical and unlike you bunch of male pussies he actually has a sense of humour🤓

I really liked it. And it was fun to read, as it moved along at a quick pace. 5 stars.

Bitch deserved her shit

Put a smile on my face, short fun read

Fun story - nice premise - good btb story

I liked it the first time I read this, and I liked it better the second.

I liked this. A little hormone therapy for the two upstanding citizens.

Hilarious.

Again, that was a good one.

WAY TOO SADISTIC FOR ME. I LIKE BTB, BUT THIS METHOD IS KINDA SICK!

It reads as if you read a bunch of stories, and just started writing down what you read. Another sorry mess of words.

Your pathetic, waste-of-bits story is essentially this:

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My wife was fat. Then she lost weight.

The bitch became a fucking whore.

I fucked her over. Real bad. (Giggle).

Now I am cool and rich.

Gimme stars.

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That's pretty much it. No real character development, the wife has no personality, the MC (you, apparently) is preternaturally smart, and yet dumb enough to have married a stupid, cheating, fat bitch having no attributes worth writing about, except her weight.

The morons who love your crap are equally vapid, it seems.

The bottom line is, you're an untalented writer of suspect intelligence who hates women.

And you can take that to the bank.

A body builder would know when sth is wrong with their supply. They are experts of their own bodies.

CINCO ESTRELLAS!

" Wrong Answer" I like your humor and stories... forget the bad comments... keep writing

Stellar. I don't know if I could buy the year of being shut down sexually by the wife but I love his execution.

The neighbour fucking the Trainer neighbour and all the details were so fucking unnecessary

Hilarious. Thanks.

way over the top

Hilarious, brilliant! :)

Loved it!

First of all in spite of what you guys want to believe adultery is not a crime What is a crime is breaking and entering, planting spy equipment and recording someone in there own home. It’s illegal to give someone who has hurt your feelings illegally attain drugs when you don’t know their effects, close to attempted murder. You can’t blackmail someone or steal their money. How can you make the cheating spouse a million time better than the offend husband? Just asking if that was the point of your story.

I love this story... because the writer is damn funny. 5*

Almost complete. What then?

Cool story, if a bit convoluted. Keep writing, practice makes perfect

That wasn’t BTB. You charbroiled the crazy cheating bitch. She broke the MCs’ heart, so he eviserated her heart and several other vital organs. Wow.

Except it took too long. 5 stars, A good ending, hope it goes well for him. The Bear liked it. More, please.

The BEAR

way to go bro

Pharmaceutical revenge on body building cheaters. Love it.