All Comments on 'Be Careful Who You Call Prey'

Hopefully. Perhaps a prequel about their relationship?

For you; a chapter 2. Thanks for the inspiration. It is in BDSM.

Brava!!

I loved it! What an original story line that is. I never saw that twist coming..the comment about the scar was a small hint, but wow! A tracking device in her skull, that is fabulous. I liked how you made Daniel so weak and pathetic, even when he thought he was in charge, it was obvious how weak he was.

I would like to see more situations of Lindsey getting hit on at a bar, and how Cassidy deals with that. And it would be cool to see Lindsey rescuing Cassidy.

Excellent characters.

Love to see it happen to a predator he deserved it ALL.....

Now only if you could write the sequel to FINC's Forced Inc. A Niece's Funeral Horror... that would be perfect for me. the girl was abducted by her jealous and envious aunt and her lecherous uncle. they rape her and secretly engage her in their basement, the story ends like that, .... the story seriously needs closure and the girl need f------ revenge! loved your story! 1thing, Cassidy should have gotten him to confess to how many girls he had kidnapped and killed, oh well, still a good story... I'm such a closure person, so I will assume Cassidy left him tied up to die :) 4 1/2 stars

the onesthat have Mistreated this slut or Mistress may not have paid so dearly. But they may wish that they had

this was in Lit's "Similar Stories" recommendations, since I don't usually read BDSM

That being said, I guess it was OK, but Dude! you need an editor in the worst way!

If he has abducted and killed as many women as you imply, then ANYTHING she does could be sufficient for him once he obsesses with her. You don't need to go into "she ignored me"

One doesn't walk on the "souls" of the foot, but on the "soles"

If you handcuff someone, it HAS to be the hands, so handcuffing the hands is redundant You can "cuff" ankles or elbows or knees, but you CANNOT "handcuff" them

The ID chip placed in the neck of a pet (Cat, Dog, or Sub, in this case) DOES NOT include GPS. There are GPS collars for dogs, but they tend to be rather bulky to account for the battery. Since she was running in the park with only an MP3 player, even a GPS enabled phone wouldn't have helped, would it?

I guess we were supposed to be surprised that she already belonged to someone else? Not from the way that she reacted to the way he treated her! Unless someone has already been "trained" even the most subservient personality would have exhibited SOME reluctance or fight

S.O.B. got what he deserved. There were certainly some grammatical errors, but I was pretty satisfied with the story overall. While I'm certain there are those who would call the sense of satisfaction I feel from even the fictional death of an abuser and admitted murderer hypocritical, I simply counter with these two thoughts; we are all hypocrites and I believe in putting vicious dogs down.