by UltimateSin
This is a category I don't usually read but when it came up in my favourites I thought as it's one of yours I would have a look at it, I enjoyed your storytelling as I usually do but it raises questions in my conventionally minded brain than it answers so I shall need to do a bit of research into the subject . However I shall look out for subsequent chapters.
Really like the romantic feeling, would prefer not to lose that. Hope that this stays a romance between a man and a transwoman but (obviously) this is your story to tell. 5*
I can see this happening. Good for Mark in not surrendering to the normal phobias of a straight man dating a "woman with extras". It will be interesting to see how his kids handle it because I'm sure they will find out the truth sooner or later. Nice that Mark always refers to and accepts her as a female instead of ignoring it. Looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks
Love this and hope there’s more. Love the tease, the interchange and the hot sex.
Best story I've read on Lit in a long, long time. Thank you so much for handling this with lov and care and not just putting out another wham-bam stroke fest.
Loved it, hope you continue this storyline, hopefully to a romantic climax.
Incredible! What are a great start.
Love that you didn’t belabor his feelings about being with a beautiful woman. Cindy, as you describe her, would have him reacting over thinking this early in the relationship - and after that… Well, I love that you’re letting this story move at a believable, real pace.
Can’t wait to read the next chapter!
What an absolutely stellar story! I'm so looking forward to the following chapters.💋
Fantastic. I love your writing style and storytelling. The flow was fantastic, the dialogue crisp and the descriptions weren't overdone. Fan-freaking-tastic.
Beautiful story! Can't wait to continue reading the next chapter.
I really like that you developed the romance before you added the sex. We've gotten to know Mark really well, he's more than just the top; he's a man I'd want to know.
I'd like to know more about Cindy. Not many full time M to Fs opt to go uncut (I'm one). A good part of the world expects you to get surgery! It's refreshing that she doesn't need to change her body.
I'll be reading the future installments. I hope you can tell us more about Cindy's journey.
I like the story, but trans girls who have been on hormones for years don't actually like... Cum. Not with much fluid, and very much not with any force. More of just a slow dribble of mostly clear liquid for a while after an orgasm. Just an fyi.
I have just found this story. I love the slow build up, discovering the personalities and the acceptance of each other as they want to be. I want to know more about them both. I will be binge reading the next chapters. xx Chloe
Swiss folk-metal band Eluveitie \m/
Great opening looking forward to how this plays out.
Fantastic,
Absolutely brilliant and loved every word you have woven for us to enjoy and follow, please let there be more, I really appreciate you time and craft . xxx