All Comments on 'Ambiramus Ch. 01'

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DevilbobyDevilbobyover 2 years ago

This is a category I don't usually read but when it came up in my favourites I thought as it's one of yours I would have a look at it, I enjoyed your storytelling as I usually do but it raises questions in my conventionally minded brain than it answers so I shall need to do a bit of research into the subject . However I shall look out for subsequent chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really like the romantic feeling, would prefer not to lose that. Hope that this stays a romance between a man and a transwoman but (obviously) this is your story to tell. 5*

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 2 years ago

I can see this happening. Good for Mark in not surrendering to the normal phobias of a straight man dating a "woman with extras". It will be interesting to see how his kids handle it because I'm sure they will find out the truth sooner or later. Nice that Mark always refers to and accepts her as a female instead of ignoring it. Looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks

Mobile49Mobile49over 2 years ago
Hot and sexy

Love this and hope there’s more. Love the tease, the interchange and the hot sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Best story I've read on Lit in a long, long time. Thank you so much for handling this with lov and care and not just putting out another wham-bam stroke fest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please make continue the story soon. 5/5

diane92374diane92374over 2 years ago

Wonderful start to a great story

mammoetmammoetover 2 years ago

Loved it hope to read ch.02 soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it and please continue. Would enjoy reading about her topping him.

missrhondamissrhondaover 2 years ago

Loved it, hope you continue this storyline, hopefully to a romantic climax.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderful story. Can’t wait for the next part to come out!!

KrissyfurKrissyfurover 2 years ago

An excellent start. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.

TheBigVoyeurTheBigVoyeurover 2 years ago

Incredible! What are a great start.

Love that you didn’t belabor his feelings about being with a beautiful woman. Cindy, as you describe her, would have him reacting over thinking this early in the relationship - and after that… Well, I love that you’re letting this story move at a believable, real pace.

Can’t wait to read the next chapter!

KoxokKoxokover 2 years ago

5* not a stroke story, but not too long either. great pacing and very sexy!

debycha1968debycha1968over 2 years ago

Cant wait to read more.

JusteenKJusteenKover 2 years ago

What an absolutely stellar story! I'm so looking forward to the following chapters.💋

f4nt4syp3nf4nt4syp3nover 2 years ago

Fantastic. I love your writing style and storytelling. The flow was fantastic, the dialogue crisp and the descriptions weren't overdone. Fan-freaking-tastic.

ThePregnantFemboy03ThePregnantFemboy03about 2 years ago

Beautiful story! Can't wait to continue reading the next chapter.

JoannaSFJoannaSFabout 2 years ago

I really like that you developed the romance before you added the sex. We've gotten to know Mark really well, he's more than just the top; he's a man I'd want to know.

I'd like to know more about Cindy. Not many full time M to Fs opt to go uncut (I'm one). A good part of the world expects you to get surgery! It's refreshing that she doesn't need to change her body.

I'll be reading the future installments. I hope you can tell us more about Cindy's journey.

RedQueensRaceRedQueensRaceabout 2 years ago

I like the story, but trans girls who have been on hormones for years don't actually like... Cum. Not with much fluid, and very much not with any force. More of just a slow dribble of mostly clear liquid for a while after an orgasm. Just an fyi.

xDarkAngel0xDarkAngel0over 1 year ago

I have just found this story. I love the slow build up, discovering the personalities and the acceptance of each other as they want to be. I want to know more about them both. I will be binge reading the next chapters. xx Chloe

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien420over 1 year ago

Swiss folk-metal band Eluveitie \m/

Great opening looking forward to how this plays out.

Fantastic,

AmberFountaineAmberFountaineover 1 year ago

Nothing wrong with romance. I'm kinda fond of it myself.

IGF1967IGF1967over 1 year ago

Great story. Looking forward to reading all of it.

Kathryn65Kathryn65about 1 year ago

Absolutely brilliant and loved every word you have woven for us to enjoy and follow, please let there be more, I really appreciate you time and craft . xxx

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

great first chapter. Thank You

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