by StoryTeller07
I presume that was a copy/paste error.
Pity - I could have graded it higher with an actual ending. 3*
Not sure what happened here. Have re-submitted the story, and checked it has been uploaded just the once. It will be available in a couple of days.
5 stars to a 1 star. there is ZERO romance here, not a love story. he plans to use and abuse her...
Nice story. Unlike other morons out here. I saw more potential for future chapters. I liked the subtle take over. Well played.
............ possible to believe! Oh how I wish something like that had happened to me when I was 18. Good read. Really enjoyed it.