by JimBob44
Great story! Nice going down memory lane with all the characters from previous stories-loved it. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
The story twists and turns and jumps around. Just like all your stories. And as always, enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
Beautiful story and has it's unexpected sadness that's heartfelt. This story brought richness in comedy, love, sadness, hope and joy. I love the character of Nina because she exudes a sexiness to the story that attracts a person sexually to her but mostly her lesbian attributes that is most attractive. Good job on the story, I loved it very much, thank you.
Do you have your characters in a database? :P. Fun update to all the players in your universe. Five stars.
A very enjoyable story that was very hard to follow. It needs more definition when shifting from one character to another. Other than that, a great story.
I love the way you manage to have your characters keep their own separate motivations and then interact. Giving them flaws and insecurities makes the interactions so much richer and more interesting. I can consistently lose myself in your stories and allow myself to just be carried along to find out where things end up, and I can't give much higher praise than that to any writer.
If she loved Christine so damn much why didn’t she do anything to try to help her???
As for Stephanie, overreact much?
Drinking while pregnant?
Anal sex? What’s that about, if she’s just trying to get pregnant?
Racism?
This is a fuckin’ mess.
One of the most convoluted stories I've ever read on here!! Never edited, waste of time!