All Comments on 'All In Pt. 01'

Nice setup for a series. I just hope this continues as a loving relationship with no manipulation

Love this story hope to read more thanks xx

Please continue!

Really has a ton of potential

Amazing, hope to see this evolve! Looking forward to more

I simply love it!!! Pt.2 ?

I give it this many stars ⬆️. As seen above.

Just loved all of it, made me feel like a was watching a motion picture in my mind. You have a awesome and vivid imagination in your stories, I hope to see a new part to this story. Wish you the best and... 🤔 hmm...

I guess you have the ability to bring forth your imagination through your words to life, don’t be afraid to let your potential shine. 🤘

Need to follow-up stories on the other players.

Next great series.

Who wouldnt want a girl like Avianna? And who wouldnt want to submit to her every kinky whim? More of this please..and soon!!

As others have said, there are great story potential for the other players. Really thought that they would do the adult media project together. Not going through with it would be a waste. But what was here was nice.

What a sexy story, I would love to meet a girl like Aviana and have her give me a good fucking.

Me ha encantado, será una gran serie como me tienes acostumbrado

love it your the kind of woman i'd love to meet, i would love to be a slave for someone like you anyday.

What about the project? Did they get a good grade?

You gave Avianna just the right blend of male/female personality. I can't believe it, but I am looking frward to more about these two.

what happen with the other players? The audience demand to know...

I liked it . Good characters , good story . Open circles beg for a continuation .

i wanted it to be longer, but this was so good, maybe the second night of poker would have been a better poke-him plan. great writing

Don't know if that is the thing for me,

Yet I find myself very curious, if I ever get the chance.

Thanks for the story, would love for it to continue

Looking forward to more

Loved it,where was Aviana when i was in college!!!

Disappointed that the first sex part was skipped....... First time is always the best.. still interesting though

I love dom trans sub guy stories, even if mildly nonconsent or forced, but i dont dig that the guy blacked out, or was so drunk that he doesnt remember anything, and she fucked him anyway. Thats called date rape. Also she completely duped him into being her boyfriend. And whats with the slave shit? The whole premise undermines the romance and affection she claims to want. Should have been posted in either nonconsent or bdsm.

I would like a girlfriend like her when we got to know her at the end. The story kept me interested and was well written.

Loved the story, great writing style to keep us interested all the way through. Please continue for the good of the people!

It is a well written hot stoy and made me excited but the pocket game part of it seemed to drag on. Would love to hear more of the relation ship between them

Both arousing and romantic. Seems to be an honest and true

Too much detail in the poker game. Unnecessary.

Out fucking standing ... This was a very welcomed change of pace . Enough character description , but not too much . I like the single POV style , it includes some nice surprises. More than anything , I like that she seduced him , rather than forced him . I'm actually kind of envious . Thanks for a great read , although , some follow up , on the rest of the characters , wouldn't hurt . 5 stars , and 2 thumbs , way ,way up .

Basically Aviana and Andrew were meant for each other,but a few inconsistencies is whether Aviana allowed Andrew to give as well as recieve in their relationship?.Also concerning the other Girls,but could Aviana be the type to share her boyfriend Andrew with the rest of the Girls as a sort of sextoy for them to enjoy?

Honestly I kinda wish she would so the girls could sit around and talk about how tight and pliable Andrews ass is while they fuck him.I mean this was basically a College Age Sex Story and should demonstrate such behavior.I really would love to see Andrew get stuffed by 5 Trans Girls who are anxious to dip their girlmeat into some freshmen asspussy,and even dump lots of loads in their and his mouth.Great story for the most part.

Fucking loved it!

Jacked off 7 times today reading it

Licked my cum off my hands panties

Dildo

Jacked off and licked the cum off hands dildo panties and ball gag

Drunk rape its not ok, fuck this bitch.

What happened to the high school girlfriend?

Make it a series please.

Nahh sorry, but a "romance" starting with a rape isn't cute no matter how much the victim happen to be into the sub role.

Their can never be any real love between a rapist and their victim.

Oh my what a great read, loved it

Another fantastic story from this writer...a must read! The premise and tone was just right for a good love story. If I need a good trans/cd story to read, this is the profile I come to. My only fear is I’ll run out of this writers story at some point. Hopefully they keep writing and posting.