All Comments on 'Alien Online'

This rather short story is one of the best I have read on Lieterotica in a very long time. It cries out for more chapters to complete the tale. I hope that you will have the time to write them in the near future. Please.

Great story. Would love to read a sequel

Thnx for the story. I enjoyed the change of pace from your Stronghold series. Hopefully you'll write more from Sinistre Agne and the planets series..this made me think of those.

This is very sweet.

Thanks.

Great study, interesting characters. Fun storyline with lots of room for creativity. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

Whow. I'm glad to see you writing again and had to check this story out. Not sure what I expected but I wasn't disappointed. I very much enjoyed it and hope to see more from you. Thanks

Enjoyed this very much. Hope to see more soon :-)

Why did these alien Dorian males need to travel untold light years to find mates outside their own species?

That would seem to be a high priority question for any woman considering mating with them.

Can we have chapters on this it's amazing!?!?