All Comments on 'After Hours at Self Checkout Ch. 01'

Excellent first story

Very nice beginning - the relationship is straightforward and mutually satisfying. Made me wet. I'd love to read more.

xoxo,

Di

Wonderful start. Please keep writing. :)

That was pretty damn good. Please continue. You have some talent!

Nice to see a first-time writer use correct grammar, too :) Keep going, we're all agog ;-)

Well written and definitely needs to be continued. I enjoyed it quite a bit.

Brilliant especially for first story, please keep writing

Would love to read the next part of the story.

Well that was hot as hell. It's always impressive when someone's first attempt really knocks the erotica out of the park. I liked Darrel's initial obliviousness at being hit on before the realisation, then really just getting into it. That fuckin' facial was awesome.

this guy has the luck of the Irish. How does that happen, I need to know. Having that happen to me, my , mouth and my manKunt would be heavenly

I was quite impressed by your submission. It was straight forward, coherent, entertaining, and arousing. I am excited to see what you do next. Bravo.

Great story

I would think you been writing for years, it was easy to follow, descriptive, hot and entertaining

I enjoyed it

Thank you

Very nice first story. I love stories about regular guys and TS cock.

great story! It felt particularly authentic. truly capturing feeling of those "forbidden" TS desires

Excellent first story! I loved your phrase "with my name tag where my heart is." I hope you write more erotic stories to share with your fellow readers soon. I hope you enjoyed my story about Tawny and it inspires you to pursue your writing.

BTW - if you are a cute little nerdy guy with a kink for strong female types - the world is your oyster!!!